"The Book of Death"
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Comment from Lulube
Ricky, I see this write as being a possible concern for a person you know or it's your subconscious talking to you. Subtle wisdom is there to behold, to better oneself. Then there's a twist that it may be the devil who's giving advice. Poor Alice.
lulube
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Ricky, I see this write as being a possible concern for a person you know or it's your subconscious talking to you. Subtle wisdom is there to behold, to better oneself. Then there's a twist that it may be the devil who's giving advice. Poor Alice.
lulube
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Thanks for tour time and review Lu, Lube.
Doctor Ricky1024
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welcome
lulube
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Hello again,
I kind of like the jagged style of this poem. It revolves your mind verse by verse, into trying to figure out where the author is taking us.
Nice job.
Mario
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Hello again,
I kind of like the jagged style of this poem. It revolves your mind verse by verse, into trying to figure out where the author is taking us.
Nice job.
Mario
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Thanks again Mario for stopping by and reviewing.
Doctor Ricky1024