Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "In Your Eyes"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
I love the somber, profound message of this beautiful poem. You've mastered haiku's--to me, poetry's most difficult form.
An excellent, wonderfully-written poem.
Good luck with all of your writing.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Gypsy,
I love the somber, profound message of this beautiful poem. You've mastered haiku's--to me, poetry's most difficult form.
An excellent, wonderfully-written poem.
Good luck with all of your writing.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much, Cindy, you are very kind and I appreciate your time and effort. Have an awesome day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is beautiful and oh so very romantic. The colors give your words that image of intimacy and love between two people.
Well done.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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This is beautiful and oh so very romantic. The colors give your words that image of intimacy and love between two people.
Well done.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is very romantic. The lines flow well. The blue and purple colors provided an atmosphere of solemnness. It emphases the secrecy of the lovers.
Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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This is very romantic. The lines flow well. The blue and purple colors provided an atmosphere of solemnness. It emphases the secrecy of the lovers.
Well done.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from BOO ghost
A beautiful tanka! I will give my two cents worth. Always appreciate the author notes. I'm a procrastinating cowlicked ghost ð??».
Spooky looking! Love that! You blend the words magnificently. Pretty presentation. Good selection of words to boot. Err-um. In nights blue creek has a good ring to it!
Count your doubloon.
BOO!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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A beautiful tanka! I will give my two cents worth. Always appreciate the author notes. I'm a procrastinating cowlicked ghost ð??».
Spooky looking! Love that! You blend the words magnificently. Pretty presentation. Good selection of words to boot. Err-um. In nights blue creek has a good ring to it!
Count your doubloon.
BOO!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanka poem- good picture presentation-
Good theme- easy to visualize- good metaphors- eyes- eternal windows to the soul- waves of love removing all doubt- good job- suggest interchanging the words to reflect the unbroken flow of the creek? Quietly lies- to 'lies quietly' -AP
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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I like your Tanka poem- good picture presentation-
Good theme- easy to visualize- good metaphors- eyes- eternal windows to the soul- waves of love removing all doubt- good job- suggest interchanging the words to reflect the unbroken flow of the creek? Quietly lies- to 'lies quietly' -AP
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you, ap, good suggestion.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Very romantic. I happen to be a hopeless romantic. I enjoyed reading this poem, including the artwork you chose and the colored font. Thank you for sharing this complete package with us.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Very romantic. I happen to be a hopeless romantic. I enjoyed reading this poem, including the artwork you chose and the colored font. Thank you for sharing this complete package with us.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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I'm a romantic too. Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
This makes me think of the deep expressiveness of eyes. The poet can see sincerity and committed love in her lover's eyes, which are like deep blue waters that wash away the doubts. Beautifully expressed!!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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This makes me think of the deep expressiveness of eyes. The poet can see sincerity and committed love in her lover's eyes, which are like deep blue waters that wash away the doubts. Beautifully expressed!!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Big Sister, I have been reading old tanka poems that inspire me. I like mixing human emotions with nature. You always get the meaning. Love you.
MariVal
Comment from royowen
There's nothing like being absolutely certain of something, mainly because most of us can sound confident, but really, if truth be known, we are generally not that certain, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy Roy y
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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There's nothing like being absolutely certain of something, mainly because most of us can sound confident, but really, if truth be known, we are generally not that certain, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy Roy y
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you Roy, blessings to you too. I appreciate your insightful and kind review. Have a lovely day.... or night.
Gypsy hugs
"Love the ones who understand you and forget the ones that don't." - Nikki Rowe
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Well done
Comment from papa55mike
Now that a perfect piece, the color is amazing and I love the two pictures. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Now that a perfect piece, the color is amazing and I love the two pictures. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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I appreciate your insightful and kind review. Have a lovely day.... or night. God bless to you too. (*-*)
Gypsy hugs
"Love the ones who understand you and forget the ones that don't." - Nikki Rowe