Is It?
I chose the letters I and T36 total reviews
Comment from JoannaN
This is it, totally it :) The text is interesting, intricated. The image is totally interesting, impressive. The iteration T, I is totally top thing.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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This is it, totally it :) The text is interesting, intricated. The image is totally interesting, impressive. The iteration T, I is totally top thing.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review!
Comment from royowen
I think you've written a very challenging and very "interesting". It takes a fair bit of concentration and also a fair amount of attentive behaviour to write one of these, well done, good luck in the contest, blessings Roy
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I think you've written a very challenging and very "interesting". It takes a fair bit of concentration and also a fair amount of attentive behaviour to write one of these, well done, good luck in the contest, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review!
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Blessings, Roy
Comment from papa55mike
I guess you're not using x and z for the letters in this contest. But I like to read one if someone did. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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I guess you're not using x and z for the letters in this contest. But I like to read one if someone did. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review!
Comment from irishauthorme
Ha, pretty clever! You managed to stay within the rules while writing an amusing story/poem. Sounded like a political conversation with my wife, or perhaps a difference of opinion with a learned person with little common sense (Present day university professors).
Neat!
irish
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Ha, pretty clever! You managed to stay within the rules while writing an amusing story/poem. Sounded like a political conversation with my wife, or perhaps a difference of opinion with a learned person with little common sense (Present day university professors).
Neat!
irish
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review!
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
Now this was interesting, a two letter poem. I liked the flow of words. You did a great job. I will have to try this sometime. Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Now this was interesting, a two letter poem. I liked the flow of words. You did a great job. I will have to try this sometime. Good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review!
Comment from Celyn
This is an intersting poem but I think the idea behind the category is that every word in the poem should begin with one of two letters, eg i and T or R and T, and nothing else. Therefore, if you pick i and T, your fifth line is ok but not the others.
Hope that helps
Celyn
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This is an intersting poem but I think the idea behind the category is that every word in the poem should begin with one of two letters, eg i and T or R and T, and nothing else. Therefore, if you pick i and T, your fifth line is ok but not the others.
Hope that helps
Celyn
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Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you for advising me. Is it any better? Please check!
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Sorry but you are still using more than two initial letetrs, You have i, T. W, U, L and C. You need to reduce this down to just two throughout the whole poem. This is very difficult to do so don't worry about it but those I believe are the requireents of this poem type.
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Thank you so much! I have changed the poem. Is it better now for a five stars rating? Please check!
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That is much better and does comply with the requirements so I would probably give you five stars now.
