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In The Winter

Kids Love It

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet, you now have two votes!

Kids definitely enjoy a white Christmas.

Personally,I have never made a snowman nor sat on Santa's knee.

I do love to eat stews and minestrone in Winter. And I have a beautiful fireplace in granite. The firebox is in cast iron and was inserted into the stone hole where the fire used to burn.

Here the national tv always transmits the same film for Christmas... The Sound of Music with the family Trapp. (sigh) I don't like musicals.

I don't like Christmas and I like to see the snow only from my window.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
    Thanks!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
    I am in one contest, animals are people too.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written Rondeau poem you have penned about the kids and the winter things they love to do. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery from the pictures you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
    Thanks, I need luck!
reply by Teri7 on 14-Nov-2022
    you are so welcome!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
    😊
reply by Teri7 on 14-Nov-2022
Comment from zanya
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A beautiful tableau of wintertime and its many aspects and delights especially for children - can almost feel that winter chill- atmosphere actively evoked

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
    Thanks
Comment from Heather Burroughs
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Your poem seems to meet all of the requirements for the contest.
It's beautifully written and reminds me of childhood even though we don't have many winter wonderlands in Louisiana lol best of luck with your entry in the upcoming contest.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
    Thanks!