Meaning of Christmas
A star marks the place where Christ was born8 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think the true meaning of Christmas often gets lost in the commercial hype and it is refreshing to read your fine acrostic here praising the true meaning of Christmas, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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I think the true meaning of Christmas often gets lost in the commercial hype and it is refreshing to read your fine acrostic here praising the true meaning of Christmas, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you Dolly 🙂
Comment from Julie G1
Lovely expression of the Nativity. Great use of clear, concise language. The graphic was well chosen, worked for this reader. I hope you keep on composing verse. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Lovely expression of the Nativity. Great use of clear, concise language. The graphic was well chosen, worked for this reader. I hope you keep on composing verse. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written and composed dedication to Christmas and the significance of Christmas, all of a sudden the promised hope of man had arrived. Beautifully written acrostic with great rhyming too, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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A beautifully written and composed dedication to Christmas and the significance of Christmas, all of a sudden the promised hope of man had arrived. Beautifully written acrostic with great rhyming too, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you Roy 🙂
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Most welcome
Comment from JLR
As the days move ever closer to the celebration of the birth of Jesus your poem prepares our minds for the time of year when we should prepare our hearts. Every single aspect about this rhyming acrostic poem is wonderful. From your selection of the perfect graphic to the meter and message is without question a message for the ages. Good luck!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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As the days move ever closer to the celebration of the birth of Jesus your poem prepares our minds for the time of year when we should prepare our hearts. Every single aspect about this rhyming acrostic poem is wonderful. From your selection of the perfect graphic to the meter and message is without question a message for the ages. Good luck!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much
Comment from papa55mike
An acrostic that rhymes, they didn't do anybody any favors in this contest! But you nailed it. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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An acrostic that rhymes, they didn't do anybody any favors in this contest! But you nailed it. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you Mike
Comment from Ricky1024
Rhyming Acrosic Poetry Writing Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Never to early for this.
Thanks for sharing and good luck with this in your Contest.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Rhyming Acrosic Poetry Writing Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Never to early for this.
Thanks for sharing and good luck with this in your Contest.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much
Comment from Celyn
This is lovely description of Christmas and rhymes well so well done. However, the rhythm goes a bit awry in places as some lines have seven beats, some eight and the last three are twelve, twelve and thirteen. As a result it reads a bit odd and disjointed in places.Having said that, I do like this poem and wish you all the best with it.
Celyn
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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This is lovely description of Christmas and rhymes well so well done. However, the rhythm goes a bit awry in places as some lines have seven beats, some eight and the last three are twelve, twelve and thirteen. As a result it reads a bit odd and disjointed in places.Having said that, I do like this poem and wish you all the best with it.
Celyn
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Mariana Convery
You did a fantastic job here. I like that almost all the beginning words are related to Christmas...Christmas, Holly, Reindeers, Icycles Snow, Three(as in trinity), Manger, Star. The only unrelated word in the list is And. I find that extremely clever and the poem well formed. The rhythme flows nicely as well. The color and picture add a nice touch. Great job!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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You did a fantastic job here. I like that almost all the beginning words are related to Christmas...Christmas, Holly, Reindeers, Icycles Snow, Three(as in trinity), Manger, Star. The only unrelated word in the list is And. I find that extremely clever and the poem well formed. The rhythme flows nicely as well. The color and picture add a nice touch. Great job!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much