A Beacon
Three 100 word stories.14 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
I like the three little touching flash stories that make our minds respond and see things through the eyes of the writers you constructed these bits of life and what they might mean.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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I like the three little touching flash stories that make our minds respond and see things through the eyes of the writers you constructed these bits of life and what they might mean.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Thanks again!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I like how you have involved the different ways we can see, feel and observe love in just a few words. How love has no boundaries and can be there in many different situations. Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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I like how you have involved the different ways we can see, feel and observe love in just a few words. How love has no boundaries and can be there in many different situations. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Hi, Nancy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Wendy G
That is quite differen! Very original. Three little stories, all quite different, on the one theme. I liked the last one best. Your words are very descriptive. I sense the physical emphasis in the first story, the spiritual in the second, and the emotional emphasis in the third. Well done. You are very imaginative.
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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That is quite differen! Very original. Three little stories, all quite different, on the one theme. I liked the last one best. Your words are very descriptive. I sense the physical emphasis in the first story, the spiritual in the second, and the emotional emphasis in the third. Well done. You are very imaginative.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Hi, Wendy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your three short stories, Mike. I
enjoyed reading all of them. My favorite was the second
one. I liked the idea of the beams producing what you so
eloquently stated. I could see this in my mind happening
as I believed it isn't visible to us. However, we feel the
results. I liked the idea of reading a 3 for 1.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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You did a great job with your three short stories, Mike. I
enjoyed reading all of them. My favorite was the second
one. I liked the idea of the beams producing what you so
eloquently stated. I could see this in my mind happening
as I believed it isn't visible to us. However, we feel the
results. I liked the idea of reading a 3 for 1.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Hi, Jan. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
What an interesting post - three stories, all different, of light and hope. I really liked the way you set this up - unique and all interesting stories. Plus, I really like flash fiction.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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What an interesting post - three stories, all different, of light and hope. I really liked the way you set this up - unique and all interesting stories. Plus, I really like flash fiction.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Hi, Pam. Thank you for your kind words and shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Judy Lawless
What an interesting story, Mike. It really makes us think about life and death and how many different ways loved ones view the death of someone important to them. Well written. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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What an interesting story, Mike. It really makes us think about life and death and how many different ways loved ones view the death of someone important to them. Well written. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Hi, Judy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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You?re very welcome, Mike.
Comment from GWHARGIS
These were all very good. But the last one gave me goosebumps. The good kind. I loved how the little boy happily welcomed the father he has never known home. I am in awe that you could conjure up such images and emotions with the word constraint. Well done. Gretchen
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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These were all very good. But the last one gave me goosebumps. The good kind. I loved how the little boy happily welcomed the father he has never known home. I am in awe that you could conjure up such images and emotions with the word constraint. Well done. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Hi, Gretchen. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Mary Shifman
They are all good though, but I really enjoyed the last story. I love a happy ending. Your ending gave me goosebumps (or chicken skin as my former husband calls them). Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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They are all good though, but I really enjoyed the last story. I love a happy ending. Your ending gave me goosebumps (or chicken skin as my former husband calls them). Well done.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Hi, Mary. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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You are welcome.
Comment from estory
A nice little post touching on all the meaning of light and beacon. Great detail in the writing made these little scenes come alive. I really liked the middle paragraph the best. A surreal, dream like abstract expressionist impression of light. estory
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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A nice little post touching on all the meaning of light and beacon. Great detail in the writing made these little scenes come alive. I really liked the middle paragraph the best. A surreal, dream like abstract expressionist impression of light. estory
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for the kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from damommy
This deserves a six, and I'm all out. I'm so sorry. These are wonderful stories that stir my heart. I like how you think and how you put your thoughts into such great writing!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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This deserves a six, and I'm all out. I'm so sorry. These are wonderful stories that stir my heart. I like how you think and how you put your thoughts into such great writing!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words, and thoughts of a six. It's deeply appreciated!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
