"The Book of Death"
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Comment from prettybluebirds
Geez, Ricky, this is one of your strangest writings ever. I know you said you are exploring the different genres, but this is just plain weird. It is written in your usual skillful manner. I did enjoy it even if it is weird.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Geez, Ricky, this is one of your strangest writings ever. I know you said you are exploring the different genres, but this is just plain weird. It is written in your usual skillful manner. I did enjoy it even if it is weird.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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I aim to entertain!
Thanks!
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Interesting take on good and evil. It reminds me of the fate of Sodom and Gomorrah. I believe th lack of love in this world is the root of all evil.
Thanks for sharing.
Mario
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Interesting take on good and evil. It reminds me of the fate of Sodom and Gomorrah. I believe th lack of love in this world is the root of all evil.
Thanks for sharing.
Mario
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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This was another chance for me to do what I do best here on Fanstory.
Entertain..
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Douglas Goff
Just awesome! Creepy, harrowing, full of angst. This is a harrowing view with a dystopia feeling.
Zombie green words. Nice touch and great attention to detail. Thank you Master Poet.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Just awesome! Creepy, harrowing, full of angst. This is a harrowing view with a dystopia feeling.
Zombie green words. Nice touch and great attention to detail. Thank you Master Poet.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thanks Dou.
Just cleaned it up a bit.
Not gory enough!
Zombies and Goblins forever!
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from sunnilicious
You're not funny. However, life does seem to be in a zombie state sometimes. I blame the pandemic, but plenty other factors lead you to the conclusion. I'm sure. Well thought out. Scary but nicely addressed. Excellent work :)
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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You're not funny. However, life does seem to be in a zombie state sometimes. I blame the pandemic, but plenty other factors lead you to the conclusion. I'm sure. Well thought out. Scary but nicely addressed. Excellent work :)
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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I just had somebody reviewed that and pointed out a couple hours so I reviewed it and made it better.
Thanks my dear Sunnilicious.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from country ranch writer
Why zombies are running loose an vampires too I sukkah say good night to you . Be sure and spread r the word they need you to sign you diners card so the vampire can depend on you all to pass life on so others can rise up.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Why zombies are running loose an vampires too I sukkah say good night to you . Be sure and spread r the word they need you to sign you diners card so the vampire can depend on you all to pass life on so others can rise up.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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So true snd call ne now "Count" instead of "Doctor!"
Ricky
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My dear count hehe
I seem to be missing three quarts of royal blood humm
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My dear count hehe
I seem to be missing three quarts of royal blood humm
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