Lords Of The Glen
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Death of a King"A A new threat arises to the north.
2 total reviews
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Very laborious and descriptive. Lots of successive action moments. I read one other chapter before, so I can relate more to the storyline.
Nice job.
Mario
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Very laborious and descriptive. Lots of successive action moments. I read one other chapter before, so I can relate more to the storyline.
Nice job.
Mario
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thanks my friend. I appreciate you!
Comment from Ricky1024
This chapter was a war chapter of intense pain surrounding the severity of a gorilla King falling to the feet of a magician.
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
With each sentence gushing with blood from each and every sentence.
Well done wondering if the next chapter is the final?
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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This chapter was a war chapter of intense pain surrounding the severity of a gorilla King falling to the feet of a magician.
...
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
With each sentence gushing with blood from each and every sentence.
Well done wondering if the next chapter is the final?
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thanks you Sir.
This is a 28 Chapter book at 80,000 words. You have been more than generous in your reviews and if you want to jump off the train and revisit whenever you have time that is no issue for me! As always, I appreciate you, my friend.
