Comment from
J L Graves
The plot seems intriguing and is enough to make me want to read more. Pot holes and homeless are great as a prop for Father Christina's journey. Both are everyday ordinary things we see, but deeply symbolic. I hope you finish the script.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
They give him 13 bologna sandwiches. No mustard. Eventually gets a sponsor from French?s mustard.
Comment from
Bill Schott
The concept of the priest story sounds like it would be both funny and inspirational. Your summary needs a bit of revision to allow the readers to believe the author is worth pursuing.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
Thank you, Bill as you know? These are just basically coming out as rough drafts along with my other works such as Air and so forth we both know that by the end it?ll be a masterpiece do we not? I think we do I think we do.