Lords Of The Glen
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Kings Meeting"A A new threat arises to the north.
2 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
This story is getting better. You are pulling it all together in a skillful manner. It's not my type of story, but I find myself more interested with each succeeding chapter. Nice writing.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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This story is getting better. You are pulling it all together in a skillful manner. It's not my type of story, but I find myself more interested with each succeeding chapter. Nice writing.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Thank you! I'm glad it's growing on you. I was aiming for 16 to 25 year olds. I appreciate you being so encouraging. I would nominate you again if I could!
Comment from Dr. Von
The intrigue continues in tight dialogue and descriptions. I like the defining descriptions of the kings and wizards. This sharpens the purpose of the powers at work in the story. You have written strong themes for the story to evolve as characters exit or diminish and new characters are added. Every scene supports the growth of the plot line. So much fun. Good writing.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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The intrigue continues in tight dialogue and descriptions. I like the defining descriptions of the kings and wizards. This sharpens the purpose of the powers at work in the story. You have written strong themes for the story to evolve as characters exit or diminish and new characters are added. Every scene supports the growth of the plot line. So much fun. Good writing.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your review Sir. You are the best!
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You are welcome.
