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Sassafras Haiku

A tree haiku for the club

6 total reviews 
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the haiku club challenge. I love the presentation. The haiku is well done. Good syllables count and connection between lines.

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 Comment Written 09-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
    Thank you for your positive feedback. I?m glad you enjoyed this haiku on the sassafras tree. I learned something about this unique tree.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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What a pretty tree and I will try to remember the name. Maybe I will see one next fall in my hike. Can human eat the fruit?

Well done and a nice entry for the club

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
    Glad you liked this one on sassafras trees. It?s unique - and I wonder if humans could also enjoy the fruit. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Mark D. R.
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June,

A very nice poem for this Haiku club entry. Learned something new from your author's note.

You paired your words and illustration in an attractive combo. Coloring scheme is good too!

Mark

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
    Glad you liked this one on sassafras trees. It?s unique - and I wonder if humans could also enjoy the fruit. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written poem you have penned about sassafras. That is very interesting about the juice and the wild turkeys. We see a lot of wild turkeys here. You used very good descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
    Yes, sassafras is an ingredient in root beer. By itself sassafras beer has a lighter and more lemony taste. I actually prefer it. Thanks for dropping by to share your thoughts!
Comment from Eternal Muse
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That was beautiful! Do you know that sassafras is one of the main ingredients if root beer? It is said to gave some medicinal qualities.
A well written haiku with all the trimmings. Excellent imagery, visuals and artistic presentation.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
    Thank you for sharing your insights and positive feedback. Much appreciated.
Comment from jessizero
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I enjoyed your tree haiku. I had heard of the sassafras tree, but I didn't know what flavor the roots were, so you taught me something. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
    I actually like the taste of sassafras beer more than root beer. Thanks for dropping by to share your thoughts.