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Blehp

Pardon the mess. My brain can't keep these thoughts down.

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Comment from Celyn
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I like this. It is funny and just about describes what happens sometimes at least to me! I think I would have made the font decreasing as I went down the poem rather than jumping out and in as you have and I am not certain about the Italics bit. Nevertheless this is a great concrete poem - well done
Celyn

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
    Celyn,
    Thank you for your review! I originally planned to decrease the font in that way, but I ran into problems with the formatting software (Probably because I make most submissions through my smartphone). The Italics we're meant to emphasize a specific thought, but now that I look at it again you may be right that it was unnecessary. Ultimately, I decided that the randomness was a fair parallel to the idea of spewing random words. I will admit that this decision may have had more to do with not wanting to reformat. Maybe I will try changing it on a desktop sometime to see if I like the descending font better.
    Thanks for the advice. I'm glad you liked my poem.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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Yes and yes to your questions. In writing classes, our instructor will often set a time and tell us to write without taking the pen off the paper. Talk about a brain dump!

Fun read - keep dumping!

Pam

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
    Haha, thanks Pam. You too! I'm glad my poem could resonate with you and that you enjoyed it.