Lords Of The Glen
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Bone Breaker Army Arrives"A A new threat arises to the north.
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Comment from Ricky1024
"The Bone Breaker Army Arrives"
Another wonderful chapter with the apes battling the goblins to the death!
Ending it with thoughts of 10 King Torin awarding Prince Taliban an amazing weapon for the future battle!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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"The Bone Breaker Army Arrives"
Another wonderful chapter with the apes battling the goblins to the death!
Ending it with thoughts of 10 King Torin awarding Prince Taliban an amazing weapon for the future battle!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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You are a good man Sir!
Comment from prettybluebirds
The word (sight) should be spelled (site). You did bring this chapter together better than the previous one. I would suggest you make these chapters about half as long as they are. A lot of reviewers won't read something this long. Your story is creative, and I can see it getting better as you go along. Try shorter chapters and I think you will find it works out well.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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The word (sight) should be spelled (site). You did bring this chapter together better than the previous one. I would suggest you make these chapters about half as long as they are. A lot of reviewers won't read something this long. Your story is creative, and I can see it getting better as you go along. Try shorter chapters and I think you will find it works out well.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Great catch! Thank you so much, you are always such a blessing!
