Deconstructing the Greats
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "I See An Angel"Here I'll share my own versions of famous poems.
18 total reviews
Comment from evilynne
Your poem is a wonderful tribute to your daughter, who is a remarkable young woman. You are a remarkable writer, as well, to have created this heartfelt poem. Evi
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Your poem is a wonderful tribute to your daughter, who is a remarkable young woman. You are a remarkable writer, as well, to have created this heartfelt poem. Evi
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much, Evi. You're always very kind. I hope you are doing well. xxx
Comment from Regina Elliott
How breathtakingly beauteous and eloquent is
this lovely tribute to your
beloved daughter. Heather,
you've got the literary gift
of writing. Keep on keepin'
on with it. Many autumnal
blessings to you and your
daughter.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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How breathtakingly beauteous and eloquent is
this lovely tribute to your
beloved daughter. Heather,
you've got the literary gift
of writing. Keep on keepin'
on with it. Many autumnal
blessings to you and your
daughter.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Hello Regina,
What I hate the most about having so much work at the moment is not being able to write and communicate with lovely people like you.
Thanks so much for this generous review and for the extra star. Have a lovely Sunday.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I too believe that a chronic or severe childhood illness does change them, I believe it makes them stronger, as in your 'Angel's ' case. A lovely poem for and about uour daughter, Heather. I hope she remains strong and positive. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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I too believe that a chronic or severe childhood illness does change them, I believe it makes them stronger, as in your 'Angel's ' case. A lovely poem for and about uour daughter, Heather. I hope she remains strong and positive. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thanks for another lovely review. Take care. X
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, meaningful, descriptive and creative.
I found these words to see the beauty in another. I really liked the
creative way the author wrote this poem and lead up to who the angel is!
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome! Thank you
for the author's notes.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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The author's words are engaging, meaningful, descriptive and creative.
I found these words to see the beauty in another. I really liked the
creative way the author wrote this poem and lead up to who the angel is!
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome! Thank you
for the author's notes.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Hi there,
I hate standard answers to reviews, but at the moment the amount of things I have to do at work is overwhelming, so I'm copying and pasting.
Thanks so much for your kind review.
Take care,
MJ
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is a beautiful poem dedicated to your daughter and describing the two of you. I lost my mother in January 2007 and mourn her every day. We had a great bond and she had a larger than life personality. There is so much love in your words about your daughter, I am sure she is very proud of this poem. She seems to be a real special person.
Excellent imagery, visuals and presentation.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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This is a beautiful poem dedicated to your daughter and describing the two of you. I lost my mother in January 2007 and mourn her every day. We had a great bond and she had a larger than life personality. There is so much love in your words about your daughter, I am sure she is very proud of this poem. She seems to be a real special person.
Excellent imagery, visuals and presentation.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Hi there,
I hate standard answers to reviews, but at the moment the amount of things I have to do at work is overwhelming, so I'm copying and pasting.
Thanks so much for your kind review.
Take care,
MJ
P.S. Sorry to hear about your mum. And yes, my daughter is truly special.
Comment from Begin Again
I, too, believe angels walk amongst us in our everyday life if only we would open our eyes, minds, and hearts and let them in. They come in so many versions and I am happy to know you can see how special your daughter is and appreciate while you can.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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I, too, believe angels walk amongst us in our everyday life if only we would open our eyes, minds, and hearts and let them in. They come in so many versions and I am happy to know you can see how special your daughter is and appreciate while you can.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Hi there,
I hate standard answers to reviews, but at the moment the amount of things I have to do at work is overwhelming, so I'm copying and pasting.
Thanks so much for your kind review.
Take care,
MJ
Comment from Shirley McLain
I loved your chapter. You are right, not everyone has an angel in their life that they know. I have been so blessed in mine. You did a great job. Enjoy your Sunday. Shirley
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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I loved your chapter. You are right, not everyone has an angel in their life that they know. I have been so blessed in mine. You did a great job. Enjoy your Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Hi there,
I hate standard answers to reviews, but at the moment the amount of things I have to do at work is overwhelming, so I'm copying and pasting.
Thanks so much for your kind review.
Take care,
MJ
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We are all proud of our children but your daughter has survived illness and has grown into a beautiful, thoughtful and wonderful young woman Heather and your poem is a great tribute to her. Your well chosen words flow like a dream and I loved your presentation. Good luck with your return to work and keep in touch, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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We are all proud of our children but your daughter has survived illness and has grown into a beautiful, thoughtful and wonderful young woman Heather and your poem is a great tribute to her. Your well chosen words flow like a dream and I loved your presentation. Good luck with your return to work and keep in touch, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Hi there,
I hate standard answers to reviews, but at the moment the amount of things I have to do at work is overwhelming, so I'm copying and pasting.
Thanks so much for your kind review.
Take care,
MJ
P.S. I'll do my best to keep in touch and then there's always Christmas when I'll have holidays.
Comment from Gloria ....
What a most thoughtful poem to your beautiful daughter who has been through so much in her young life already. Testimony to her and your resiliency and love for life.
The photograph is terrific.
This is a six star poem for sure. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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What a most thoughtful poem to your beautiful daughter who has been through so much in her young life already. Testimony to her and your resiliency and love for life.
The photograph is terrific.
This is a six star poem for sure. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Hi there,
Wow, Gloria. The six stars mean a lot coming from a great poet like you.
I hate standard answers to reviews, but at the moment the amount of things I have to do at work is overwhelming, so I'm copying and pasting.
Thanks so much for your kind review.
Take care,
MJ
Comment from BOO ghost
Nice poem! My cat Baby Angel is my angel. Angels exist! I won't go into details but I have had experiences. I would be a ghost without angels. Angels are assigned to us and watching us. They give signs if you pay attention. fibromyalgia is painful. My sister had cancer. Started in lymp nodes. Went into remission a few years. Came back as breast cancer. Cancer can come back. Nice dedication to your daughter! I been gone from Fanstory for years. Came back two moons ago.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Nice poem! My cat Baby Angel is my angel. Angels exist! I won't go into details but I have had experiences. I would be a ghost without angels. Angels are assigned to us and watching us. They give signs if you pay attention. fibromyalgia is painful. My sister had cancer. Started in lymp nodes. Went into remission a few years. Came back as breast cancer. Cancer can come back. Nice dedication to your daughter! I been gone from Fanstory for years. Came back two moons ago.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Hi there,
I hate standard answers to reviews, but at the moment the amount of things I have to do at work is overwhelming, so I'm copying and pasting.
Thanks so much for your kind review.
Take care,
MJ
P.S. I do remember you. I've also been away for two years.
