Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good entry to the 2-3-2 Poem Contest. The text is a nice size. The message is clearly stated and is one we all wish would happen.
I would drop the first line of the poem down a couple of spaces for better balance in the poem box. I would hit enter a couple of times at the end of the last sentence to make the poem box larger. The poem will be balanced in the box better. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022

Thanks for your help Sandra. I am rubbish at the technical side of things

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 06-Nov-2022

I understand. You are welcome.

Comment from Mariana Convery

Excellent

The word count is there, and with so few words, it just says it all. We're all in this together. Nice job expressing what most of us today are feeling.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022

Thank you so much Mariana.

Comment from Celyn

Excellent

Don't we all. This is a good poem that follows the requirements of a 2-3-2 poem well. The sentiments are wonderful but have been used by a lot of people so maybe you could have tried something a bit different here - I don't know what though.
Good luck with it
Celyn

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022

Thanks a lot for your comments. I do agree. I don?t usually write this kind of corny stuff. It was just an experiment really.