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Comment from Teri7
Wendy, This is a very well written 2-3-2 poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good words that we all needed to hear. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Wendy, This is a very well written 2-3-2 poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good words that we all needed to hear. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you Teri. I appreciate your lovely words. (Unfortunately it didn?t do well in the contest.)
Wendy
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It was really good. Sometimes the best don't win. I can't understand that!
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Thank you Teri. That's a lovely encouragement. And everybody sees things differently ....
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Wendy, I love to read your work. You are a very good writer, and you do interesting things! love and blessings, Teri
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Thank you so much Teri. You are such an encouragement!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Your words go well with this picture Wendy. Thankfully life isn't all such hard yakka. If you have loved and are loved I think the up and down hills makes for a good ending. Enjoyed your 2-3-2 poem. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Your words go well with this picture Wendy. Thankfully life isn't all such hard yakka. If you have loved and are loved I think the up and down hills makes for a good ending. Enjoyed your 2-3-2 poem. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much Valda. I'm glad you enjoyed this very tiny one. And you are right. Life is a balance of both ups and sowns, and that is best or we would never appreciate the many good things we have all the time.
Wendy
Comment from harmony13
I like the title of your poem! Yes, life is hard! I agree with the author's
word. This 3 line poem gives great advise. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is great and compliments the words of this poem.
Have a great week, Wendy!....Maria
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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I like the title of your poem! Yes, life is hard! I agree with the author's
word. This 3 line poem gives great advise. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is great and compliments the words of this poem.
Have a great week, Wendy!....Maria
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Thank you Maria for your lovely review. Always appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Fleedleflump
You sum it up perfectly in such a short format. We can only do what we can do, in the acknowledgement that it's always a challenge and what we do may not be enough, but I think intention and dedication count for much.
Mike
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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You sum it up perfectly in such a short format. We can only do what we can do, in the acknowledgement that it's always a challenge and what we do may not be enough, but I think intention and dedication count for much.
Mike
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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You are right. Thank you very much for your encouraging review.
Wendy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt contest. Wise words about life.
Good syllables count and connection between lines. Excellent imagery and presentation. Well done! I wish you the best.
Gypsy
"Smile, breathe and go slowly." -- Thich Nhat Hanh
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Excellent entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt contest. Wise words about life.
Good syllables count and connection between lines. Excellent imagery and presentation. Well done! I wish you the best.
Gypsy
"Smile, breathe and go slowly." -- Thich Nhat Hanh
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much Gypsy. Your thoughtful words and good wishes are encouraging.
Comment from patricia dillon
You have done your best to convey a meaningful message in these few words. The image of trekking up a mountain is well-chosen and evocative. The illustration is very important in this case.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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You have done your best to convey a meaningful message in these few words. The image of trekking up a mountain is well-chosen and evocative. The illustration is very important in this case.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for your encouraging review. Always appreciated.
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You're welcome
Comment from Celyn
This poem says it all really and follows the rules of a 2-3-2 poem so well done. I think its sentiments have been used many times before by many different authors but that does not make them any less a truism.
Good luck with it.
Celyn
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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This poem says it all really and follows the rules of a 2-3-2 poem so well done. I think its sentiments have been used many times before by many different authors but that does not make them any less a truism.
Good luck with it.
Celyn
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Yes, I'm sure plenty have expressed those same sentiments - perhaps with more words, even books also. It's definitely a very short summary of a philosophy of life! Lol. Many thanks.
Comment from Denizen Kane
Your poem is one I can imagine having been taped to the bathroom mirror, as both a reminder and an inspiration, that what you wrote is soulfully true. Fight the good fight. Finish the race. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Your poem is one I can imagine having been taped to the bathroom mirror, as both a reminder and an inspiration, that what you wrote is soulfully true. Fight the good fight. Finish the race. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your review a lot.
Comment from Zue65
It is really difficult to pack in message into a poem as short as the 232 poetical form. But the author was able to squeeze in the meaning excellently with the choice of words that will convey the meaning as the author intended for the readers. Thanks for writing. Kudos.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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It is really difficult to pack in message into a poem as short as the 232 poetical form. But the author was able to squeeze in the meaning excellently with the choice of words that will convey the meaning as the author intended for the readers. Thanks for writing. Kudos.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thank you for such a lovely review. I appreciate it greatly.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Life can be hard with great challenges and we strive to make it good along the way and have an optimistic outlook. I enjoyed the positivity here, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Life can be hard with great challenges and we strive to make it good along the way and have an optimistic outlook. I enjoyed the positivity here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thank you for such an encouraging review. I appreciate it.
