Comment from SomePerson

Exceptional

I love how this flows and how well connected it is. Your love forever is forever my wish. So perfect. It is very nice aesthetically too.

Did you show this to her? I'm unsure if you already proposed, but if not, I hope she says "yes!"

Best Wishes for your Forever!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022

Dear Some, Thanks for the read and feedback. As said, my good fortunate is that we are still working on forever.

reply by SomePerson on 06-Nov-2022

So glad to hear it!

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

Yes, that pretty much says it all. This is a good entry to the 2-3-2 contest. Your text is a great size. Your message is short but expresses your wish clearly. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

Thank you for your read and review.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 05-Nov-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

Nice response to the prompt. A very concise poem getting to the core of the desire of a romantic relationship--the desire for the love to last forever. Well done.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

Thanks for the read and feedback. Appreciated.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Poet, you could not convey your wish more succinctly.
The lovely photo makes us think he's proposing on a moonlit evening. How could she not say "Yes!" Good luck in the contest. Rod

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

Thanks, Rod, for your read and encouraging feedback.