Lessons Learned and Spiritual
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Divine Clouds"Do good and feel good poems
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Comment from Sanku
It is time for Him to come back.We definitely need a saviour right now.
I loved your lines in the second stanza.what a lovely thought! Very good entry for the club event
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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It is time for Him to come back.We definitely need a saviour right now.
I loved your lines in the second stanza.what a lovely thought! Very good entry for the club event
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Hi Santha, thank you for this lovely review and comments for my poem. When I wrote this, I expected I was doing it only for the club and didn't realize that it would show on this side too. It was my first time writing for them and that is why I was kinda confused. Anyway I appreciate your very kind words and am so happy to see you again my sweet friend.
Btw; I read and reviewed your interview with Helen last night! It was awesome and it was nice to learn so many interesting things about you.
Comment from Wendy G
These are stunning pictures of clouds! And your words certainly provoke thought and praise, and yes, a longing for heaven. My only suggestion is to increase the size of your font to make it easier to read. It's a beautiful write! Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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These are stunning pictures of clouds! And your words certainly provoke thought and praise, and yes, a longing for heaven. My only suggestion is to increase the size of your font to make it easier to read. It's a beautiful write! Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much Wendy, for such a lovely review and comments. I love when you review me, because you give me the greatest feedback as well as kind words. And all done so respectfully. Yes I actually increased the font this morning and love to be told because my eyes can't really tell. I live with double vision and a couple years ago had shingles in the retina of my eyes. Actually I have a funny little story about it, even tho when it got more advanced it really isn't that funny. A couple years ago when I was decorating my Christmas tree, I turned on the lights and I thought I had the most beautiful tree I had ever had before. I was so pleased. Then the next day I went shopping at Walmart and by the time I got out of there it was dark already. I started for home but by the time I got on the busy highway, the lights were coming at me by 100X or more. Thankfully I was able to pull over, not knowing what was wrong with me. All I knew was that all I could see were lights coming from everywhere. I called my husband to come and get me and he drove the car home and left the other one in a nearby parking lot for the night. The next day went to the eye doctor and he said I had shingles in the retina of my eyes. It was very painful and damaged my ability to see lights accurately now and left me with blurred vision. That is why you so rarely see me review, because it is hard enough to write and post well enough. Then the more that I am on my computer or ipad, it gets worse. And there are not any glasses that can help it. So that is my very long story
(sorry about that) of why I appreciate your feedback so very much.
Thank you my beautiful friend for listening to that and also for your very lovely review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
If this is what you come up with when you do something in the spur of the moment, then I would suggest you write that way all of the time! You've given us a clear picture of your beliefs and speculations of what lies ahead. Great rhyming - lovely:-)
My only critique is the font - I had to "look closely" to read it, and I know that a lot of people on this site will have trouble with it. If you're going to leave it in cursive, I would enlarge it. Yes, the style suits this poem well, but some will struggle with it.
Take care, my friend.
xxoo
Pam
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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If this is what you come up with when you do something in the spur of the moment, then I would suggest you write that way all of the time! You've given us a clear picture of your beliefs and speculations of what lies ahead. Great rhyming - lovely:-)
My only critique is the font - I had to "look closely" to read it, and I know that a lot of people on this site will have trouble with it. If you're going to leave it in cursive, I would enlarge it. Yes, the style suits this poem well, but some will struggle with it.
Take care, my friend.
xxoo
Pam
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Hi Pam, would you do me a favor and take a look. My editing went screwy on me when I changed to an easier to read font and enlarged. On my ipad it looks like it covers to whole page, but I don't know if that is what you see,
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It looks better on my computer, bigger, but I couldn't read it on my phone. Debi, if no one else has said anything about it being hard to leave, then I'd just leave it alone.
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I changed the font and the size, but now my poem is way down on my ipad. I think I was trying to change too many things. No, I want you to always tell me what you think, because it is too hard for me to tell. Thank you so much my sweet friend. And for the lovely comments you made. Thanks again.
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I was able to increase my font a little more by splitting my last line up on two different lines. I normally don't like doing it, but the last line I think it looks fine. I would rather people could read it rather than worry about the last line. And there was no way for me to shorten that without losing meaning. If you don't mind looking one mor time, I sure would appreciate it.
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That does look better, and it actually highlights the most important part of the last line by having it on a line by itself. I think you've got it!
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Oh Hon, I appreciate you so much. Thank you so very much. It is bad enough with my eyes the way they are, but all of a sudden to see my poem about a foot down the page and not knowing what is going on, that kind of scared me. So you are one heck of a twin sister!!
😘❤️❤️❤️🥰
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Right back at ya 😘
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine faithful write and I enjoyed the rhymes here, believing in something gives us an uplifting feeling and helps to make each day worth living, much enjoyed Debi, love Dolly x
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A fine faithful write and I enjoyed the rhymes here, believing in something gives us an uplifting feeling and helps to make each day worth living, much enjoyed Debi, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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As always, I love hearing from you Dolly. You are always so sweet and I so appreciate all of your kind words for my poem. Thank you so very much, my dear dear friend.
Comment from royowen
Yes, like a mighty warrior, He will come in the clouds of Heaven, as He left shortly after His resurrection ascending into those very clouds, this is so beautifully written dear Debi, you're a first class writer dear girl,I'm glad I'm your fan, well done, blessings Roy
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Yes, like a mighty warrior, He will come in the clouds of Heaven, as He left shortly after His resurrection ascending into those very clouds, this is so beautifully written dear Debi, you're a first class writer dear girl,I'm glad I'm your fan, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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And Roy, you just gave me the nicest compliment I have ever had.
I remember when I first got here, you always encouraged me and said that it would come. Now tonight I threw together a poem in a half hour and you blessed me with the loveliest words ever. I guess when God leads us to tell His Truth, His Word always shines; as you have shown over and over again.
As my favorite author, fellow Christian and friend, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. And as a very wise man always says; 'Blessings!'
Love you my dear friend! Debi
Comment from Mario PIERRE
This is an ode to joy and immeasurable hope in eternity. Beautiful writing, makes me dream of the glad days awaiting me above.
Great insight on Heaven and Salva
Mario
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This is an ode to joy and immeasurable hope in eternity. Beautiful writing, makes me dream of the glad days awaiting me above.
Great insight on Heaven and Salva
Mario
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
Awe, thank you so very much Mario. You are always so sweet and I appreciate your very lovely words. It is always so nice to hear from you and have you review my posts. So appreciated!
Thank you again my dear friend.
