Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Scene with Ged and Ned"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
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Comment from BethShelby
This clone, Ged. does appear to be nearly as much of a Knucklehead as Ned because he keep on correcting Ned. I guess the Ned in the next county was the dude that got vapped away by Ded. If so, does that me we have to deal with both Ned and his clone?
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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This clone, Ged. does appear to be nearly as much of a Knucklehead as Ned because he keep on correcting Ned. I guess the Ned in the next county was the dude that got vapped away by Ded. If so, does that me we have to deal with both Ned and his clone?
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Ged has been around for a while, but I had no backstory for Ned having a clone. I thought this might be a way to slip it in for future use. ............................
Comment from BethShelby
This clone, Ged. does appear to be nearly as much of a Knucklehead as Ned because he keep on correcting Ned. I guess the Ned in the next county was the dude that got vapped away by Ded. If so, does that me we have to deal with both Ned and his clone?
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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This clone, Ged. does appear to be nearly as much of a Knucklehead as Ned because he keep on correcting Ned. I guess the Ned in the next county was the dude that got vapped away by Ded. If so, does that me we have to deal with both Ned and his clone?
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Ged has been around for a while, but I had no backstory for Ned having a clone. I thought this might be a way to slip it in for future use. ............................
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Apparently you are still get duplicates from me. I wish I knew why.
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It's usually a local thing that comes and goes.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, well Ned ate more than a banana in my opinion, Bill.
He must've had some silly soup with it. The host did a great
job trying to stay on task for his show. You have a host of
characters to draw on for these one scene scripts. They are
always funny in a weird way--that's a compliment.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Haha, well Ned ate more than a banana in my opinion, Bill.
He must've had some silly soup with it. The host did a great
job trying to stay on task for his show. You have a host of
characters to draw on for these one scene scripts. They are
always funny in a weird way--that's a compliment.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Jan
Comment from judiverse
Perhaps Ded shouldn't give warnings. Just what we need, a clone for Ned. Funny confusion over Peach's name. Nuckledd is a great name. Peach's last comment sums up things very nicely. Clever "general equivalency" reference. judi
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Perhaps Ded shouldn't give warnings. Just what we need, a clone for Ned. Funny confusion over Peach's name. Nuckledd is a great name. Peach's last comment sums up things very nicely. Clever "general equivalency" reference. judi
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Judi.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from lyenochka
Ned is probably the luckiest guy alive. It's good that he's friends with DED and has someone with the exact same name in the nearby vicinity so that neither he nor his clone had an appointment with DED
Suggestion:
So DED let's Ned (lets)
I don't know if I saved this because we had a power outage last night...
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Ned is probably the luckiest guy alive. It's good that he's friends with DED and has someone with the exact same name in the nearby vicinity so that neither he nor his clone had an appointment with DED
Suggestion:
So DED let's Ned (lets)
I don't know if I saved this because we had a power outage last night...
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Lets!!!
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I know. We should outlaw contractions or revise the whole its/it's thing...
Comment from susand3022
Well, Bill, who'd uh thunk it? Two Neds? What were the odds? I guess DED warned the wrong Ned. If he hadn't, then you have to wonder... would the other Ned have made Ged instead? Would Ged now be dead and there would still be two Neds? It's mind boggling! ;)
What a county!
Susan :)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Well, Bill, who'd uh thunk it? Two Neds? What were the odds? I guess DED warned the wrong Ned. If he hadn't, then you have to wonder... would the other Ned have made Ged instead? Would Ged now be dead and there would still be two Neds? It's mind boggling! ;)
What a county!
Susan :)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Neds? I shudder.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. What a mess. Ned, Ged and Ded which might mean death or might not. The angel of death just gave a warning so don't mind. Ned just ate a banana. So relax.
Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Haha. What a mess. Ned, Ged and Ded which might mean death or might not. The angel of death just gave a warning so don't mind. Ned just ate a banana. So relax.
Well done.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Lisa
Comment from Mario PIERRE
OMG...!! I have so thoroughly enjoyed this passage. I've burst in laughter several times as the fun is certainly all along the dialogue. Very refined and refreshing humor, very well done.
Thank you for having brightened my moment!!!
Mario
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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OMG...!! I have so thoroughly enjoyed this passage. I've burst in laughter several times as the fun is certainly all along the dialogue. Very refined and refreshing humor, very well done.
Thank you for having brightened my moment!!!
Mario
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Mario
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is another very cute and very funny script you have penned. You always come up with some very funny and descriptive words and dialogue. Thanks for the smile tonight! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Bill, This is another very cute and very funny script you have penned. You always come up with some very funny and descriptive words and dialogue. Thanks for the smile tonight! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from nomi338
All is well that ends well. Ned gets to continue his nefarious ways, Ged gets to be a shining example of what Ned could and possibly should be, and the world gets to continuously enjoy Ned's strange utterings.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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All is well that ends well. Ned gets to continue his nefarious ways, Ged gets to be a shining example of what Ned could and possibly should be, and the world gets to continuously enjoy Ned's strange utterings.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thanks, nomi
