Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem you have penned about feelings about the past that hurt so bad. You used very good descriptive words and very interesting art work. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022

Thanks Teri for the review.
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from Carolann Renaud

Excellent

Hoping I don't sound redundant. But once again I am moved by the force and power of deep emotional trauma. As I thought of you writing this I also thought of two very good and powerful things taking place here. Your choice to call out to God and the courage to fight the darkness from enveloping your soul. The rawness of faith unfolding even when you could not feel it. Your gift with words beautifully conveys these things.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022

It's all from my Only Son Jason.
This was actually written in less than 6 minutes right off the dance floor at the Hard Rock H.
Thanks,
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Thanks,
Dear Poet friend.
Ricky

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

Very poignant and emotional hymn to a lost family member. I like the immovable, unshakeable feeling that even if your heart still hurts, the one in heaven is in control.
As always, I find great pleasure in reading Dr. RICKY'S poems.
Thank you for having shared this.
Mario

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022

Thanks Mario.
A pleasure too!
Doctor Ricky 1024