Face with no name
Title of poem speaks for itself.30 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This sounds like a cry for help, maybe a relationship that requires rethinking. Why would anyone allow themselves to be treated that way. It's not really love. A powerful piece, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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This sounds like a cry for help, maybe a relationship that requires rethinking. Why would anyone allow themselves to be treated that way. It's not really love. A powerful piece, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Sounds like an unhealthy relationship to me! I love the continuity of the lines and the way you tell your lover off! I especially love how you speak to him no holds back! I think you have written honestly why all the reasons you should let him go and try to face the world on your own two feet. I see no grammatical errors in this and no typos so the only thing I have left to say is to walk out the door and don't let it hit you on the back!
Jesse
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Sounds like an unhealthy relationship to me! I love the continuity of the lines and the way you tell your lover off! I especially love how you speak to him no holds back! I think you have written honestly why all the reasons you should let him go and try to face the world on your own two feet. I see no grammatical errors in this and no typos so the only thing I have left to say is to walk out the door and don't let it hit you on the back!
Jesse
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thanks for your words of encouragement and review.
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You're welcome, Charity. Keep up the good work!
Jesse
Comment from Paul McFarland
You are right, Charity. It's time to let him go. After he is old and gray, he will probably smarten up, but you have better things to do than to wait for that.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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You are right, Charity. It's time to let him go. After he is old and gray, he will probably smarten up, but you have better things to do than to wait for that.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Good to hear from you.
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
Wish i had a six for you, i loved this poem
the picture is priceless goes very well with
the rhyming and the poem itself great job
my friend
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Wish i had a six for you, i loved this poem
the picture is priceless goes very well with
the rhyming and the poem itself great job
my friend
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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I'm glad you loved it. Thanks.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I think there's a fundamental duality I'm all people - we seek connection when we're alone, but we resent proximity when we have too much of it. All the time, society is split on what's right or wrong, and there's no guide book for how to deal with contrary thoughts and feelings.
Awesome piece.
Mike
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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I think there's a fundamental duality I'm all people - we seek connection when we're alone, but we resent proximity when we have too much of it. All the time, society is split on what's right or wrong, and there's no guide book for how to deal with contrary thoughts and feelings.
Awesome piece.
Mike
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Yes. Let him go, as the Disney character sings. Or, maybe it was snow, anywhohow you know what you wrote, and as usual it is pliant with deep sorrow. I wish someone could lift the furrow from your brow, to have you smile and look about to the wonder that you could be once you discover the godliness in yourself. luv ya.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Yes. Let him go, as the Disney character sings. Or, maybe it was snow, anywhohow you know what you wrote, and as usual it is pliant with deep sorrow. I wish someone could lift the furrow from your brow, to have you smile and look about to the wonder that you could be once you discover the godliness in yourself. luv ya.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Much love.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This poem reveals a hard truth, a relationship is pulling apart. The message is clearly presented. One can feel the pain and frustration of the speaker. The text could be a bit larger. The first line under the visual could be dropped down one space for better balance in the poem box. You have lots of room at the bottom. The visual fits well. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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This poem reveals a hard truth, a relationship is pulling apart. The message is clearly presented. One can feel the pain and frustration of the speaker. The text could be a bit larger. The first line under the visual could be dropped down one space for better balance in the poem box. You have lots of room at the bottom. The visual fits well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thanks for stopping by to read my poem.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Aussie
All relationships have their ups and downs. You sound like a couple of alley cats fighting. Why do we stay in a relationship that is manipulated by one or the other? It isn't love, it's leaning on each other until one breaks.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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All relationships have their ups and downs. You sound like a couple of alley cats fighting. Why do we stay in a relationship that is manipulated by one or the other? It isn't love, it's leaning on each other until one breaks.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Exactly.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Well, my goodness. This sounds like an angry rant about a toxic relationship. Life is too short to live unhappy. Even reading about that type of relationship is stressful.
This was well written and the ending rhymes just added to the flavor like butter on bread. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Well, my goodness. This sounds like an angry rant about a toxic relationship. Life is too short to live unhappy. Even reading about that type of relationship is stressful.
This was well written and the ending rhymes just added to the flavor like butter on bread. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from royowen
Some relational partnerships shouldn't be, but that can change, nothing is really beyond redemption, depending on the person, I don't know whether this is about you or not Charity, a very typical work, I hope you're doing well. Good job charity, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Some relational partnerships shouldn't be, but that can change, nothing is really beyond redemption, depending on the person, I don't know whether this is about you or not Charity, a very typical work, I hope you're doing well. Good job charity, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Much love my friend.
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Welcome Charity
