My silent soulmate
Never any conversation.2 total reviews
Comment from Celyn
This is fine as long as you use two syllables for qui-et, which I presume is what you intended. It, therefore, fulfills the requirements of a 5-7-5 poem so well done.
I hope you do well with it.
Celyn
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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This is fine as long as you use two syllables for qui-et, which I presume is what you intended. It, therefore, fulfills the requirements of a 5-7-5 poem so well done.
I hope you do well with it.
Celyn
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Thanks. Yes there are 2 syllables in quiet.
Comment from Nichole Helm
liking the haiku
Ironic absurd yet true
numbers askew
Very good poem. I don't think the syllables were on point, but it was great. You were short yet descriptive about the parrot. Nice.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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liking the haiku
Ironic absurd yet true
numbers askew
Very good poem. I don't think the syllables were on point, but it was great. You were short yet descriptive about the parrot. Nice.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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I followed the rules for this competition which is 5-7-5. 17 syllables.
No problem. I assumed you were new. All the best. Jen
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I am new forgive me on my error please. I think yours was actually my very first review. When I get some of my work posted please feel free to review also. I have learned a few things about how the reviewing is done since. I was unaware that everyone gave high stars. I hope your not offended by my simple inexperience.
