Lords Of The Glen
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Struggle For Tuggle"A A new threat arises to the north.
2 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Von
Your chapter contents are strongly aligned. The breadth of this story is thoroughly expressed. Strong descriptions of places and their purpose. This keeps the flow line tight. I like the continuing balance between battle locations and character relationships. Good job with story evolution and landing transitions.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Your chapter contents are strongly aligned. The breadth of this story is thoroughly expressed. Strong descriptions of places and their purpose. This keeps the flow line tight. I like the continuing balance between battle locations and character relationships. Good job with story evolution and landing transitions.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thanks you, kind Sir! I appreciate yu following along with my story.
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You are welcome, friend.
Comment from Ricky1024
This reminded me of the last planet of the apes movie which was pretty graphic but had a happy ending.
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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This reminded me of the last planet of the apes movie which was pretty graphic but had a happy ending.
...
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Thank you Sir!
