Love, From Your Best Friend
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A very touching poem about a life gone too soon. I like the sentiment of your thoughts. You speak well about the friend; it shows that you cared and that is a wonderful feeling.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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A very touching poem about a life gone too soon. I like the sentiment of your thoughts. You speak well about the friend; it shows that you cared and that is a wonderful feeling.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review, I miss her terribly. I'm glad you took the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Charlotte Morse
A very moving poem, told with so much feeling. And it rhymes! I take my hat off to you.
The image you've used is so apt and fits the poem beautifully.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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A very moving poem, told with so much feeling. And it rhymes! I take my hat off to you.
The image you've used is so apt and fits the poem beautifully.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you, I'm glad you took the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A heartfelt write and I am sorry for your loss, I can identify with these words as our friends die around us and surviving them can be a trial as we suffer deep grief, fine rhymes here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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A heartfelt write and I am sorry for your loss, I can identify with these words as our friends die around us and surviving them can be a trial as we suffer deep grief, fine rhymes here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review and your kind words...both are very appreciated. :)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This a good entry to the "Friend in Heaven" contest. The text is a great size. Your message of shared activities thar are now missed is well-written. There is one small typo to correct...were are jam should be written~ were our jam.
The visual fits perfectly, especially with the hand extended to the empty swing. The poem and presentation are well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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This a good entry to the "Friend in Heaven" contest. The text is a great size. Your message of shared activities thar are now missed is well-written. There is one small typo to correct...were are jam should be written~ were our jam.
The visual fits perfectly, especially with the hand extended to the empty swing. The poem and presentation are well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this great review and for the correction. I really appreciate it. :)
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Had to correct my own typo. You are welcome.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very nice indeed! I like how you matched the font color to the exact color of the picture.
Two corrections:
Steven King is spelled Stephen King, (Common mistake)
Also :
were are jam
should be
were our jam
Fix these two up and you will be spot on with a wonderful piece of work!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Very nice indeed! I like how you matched the font color to the exact color of the picture.
Two corrections:
Steven King is spelled Stephen King, (Common mistake)
Also :
were are jam
should be
were our jam
Fix these two up and you will be spot on with a wonderful piece of work!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this nice review and for the corrections, I appreciate it so much.
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Your a good writer. Grammar can be fixed. Keep up the entertaining work!
Comment from prettybluebirds
I love the artwork you chose for this writing. It adds a lot to the meaning of the poem. It is always sad to lose a friend, and one often wonders if they think of us. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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I love the artwork you chose for this writing. It adds a lot to the meaning of the poem. It is always sad to lose a friend, and one often wonders if they think of us. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review, it's very kind of you. :)
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this great review...
It means a lot to me. :)
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great poem for the writing prompt. The poem is a mixture of sadness, joy, and encouragement. It strikes a nice mix with down-to-earth examples and details that add to the honesty of the poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Great poem for the writing prompt. The poem is a mixture of sadness, joy, and encouragement. It strikes a nice mix with down-to-earth examples and details that add to the honesty of the poem. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. :)
Comment from Mario PIERRE
So, so well written...!!! It conveys feelings of sadness, regrets and lice. Very touching. I like the simple words used to depict such great emotions. I very much enjoyed it.
Mario
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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So, so well written...!!! It conveys feelings of sadness, regrets and lice. Very touching. I like the simple words used to depict such great emotions. I very much enjoyed it.
Mario
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thanks for this great review, it's so appreciated. )
Comment from Goosey Gander
"God called me home when you weren't there." This is such a touching poem, and it left me feeling so sad. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem, it is creative in the rhymes and theme.
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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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"God called me home when you weren't there." This is such a touching poem, and it left me feeling so sad. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem, it is creative in the rhymes and theme.
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review, I'm so glad you took the time to read my poem. :)
