Tanka Collection
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Comment from Mark Schardine
When we were one - You cannot let go of the beautiful memories, and each time an event recalls that time, you stop to ponder it again. It can be a joyful time when it happens.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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When we were one - You cannot let go of the beautiful memories, and each time an event recalls that time, you stop to ponder it again. It can be a joyful time when it happens.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and helpfull feedback. You are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem had good sensory appeal. I like how the wind and one's heart travel as one. Of special note:
riding autumn breeze
as it meanders the path
we strolled ... when we were one
(Good imagery)
Well done. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing.
Xo. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Hi Gypsy, your poem had good sensory appeal. I like how the wind and one's heart travel as one. Of special note:
riding autumn breeze
as it meanders the path
we strolled ... when we were one
(Good imagery)
Well done. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing.
Xo. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Margaret, I always appreciate your reviews, and thank you for your support and lovely words.
Gypsy hugs
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I was so behind. I'm trying to catch up. I've been doing it member by member.
Sometimes I find it easier that way.
Xo. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
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I appreciate it, Margaret. You are an excellent reviewer. Big hugs, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanka poem- good picture presentation- poem flows exceptionally well- breeze meandering- nice touch- good use of metaphors- path we strolled- good connection- good job
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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I like your Tanka poem- good picture presentation- poem flows exceptionally well- breeze meandering- nice touch- good use of metaphors- path we strolled- good connection- good job
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate the exceptional review! and kind words. I hope you are doing well.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and that picture made me thirsty for beer, and reminds me I'm pissed that all that money I spent over the years to get that dizzy feeling was wasted; all along, I could have just suffered a head injury and I'd get it for free!
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and that picture made me thirsty for beer, and reminds me I'm pissed that all that money I spent over the years to get that dizzy feeling was wasted; all along, I could have just suffered a head injury and I'd get it for free!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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LoL
Thank you, I appreciate the exceptional review! and kind words. I hope you are doing well.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I like the wistful feel of this autumnal tanka. And how lovely is that autumn breeze "as it meanders the path
we strolled " although the narrator implies that they are no longer one as autumn leads to the winter of their love...
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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I like the wistful feel of this autumnal tanka. And how lovely is that autumn breeze "as it meanders the path
we strolled " although the narrator implies that they are no longer one as autumn leads to the winter of their love...
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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I am glad you like this tanka, I really enjoy writing them. I think it's the emotional and dramatic in me. LoL Thank you for the review, big sister. I hope you are doing well.
Love you,
MariVal
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Each time I read one of your posts, I'm always amazed at how you present a perfect package for us. The artwork you choose and the poem itself, is always great, then you finish it with colored font. I'm in awe of you.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Each time I read one of your posts, I'm always amazed at how you present a perfect package for us. The artwork you choose and the poem itself, is always great, then you finish it with colored font. I'm in awe of you.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Barbara, I appreciate the exceptional review and kind words. I hope you are doing well.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
How fascinating it would be to follow the path of the wind, on its way, and on its course, across the oceans in the the quest to carry eagles on the wings of wind, beautifully written blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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How fascinating it would be to follow the path of the wind, on its way, and on its course, across the oceans in the the quest to carry eagles on the wings of wind, beautifully written blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sugarray77
Just beautiful, Gypsy. It is so indicative of the slow, burnt glow of an Indian Summer... then you ramp it up and add an emotional tremor. So well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Just beautiful, Gypsy. It is so indicative of the slow, burnt glow of an Indian Summer... then you ramp it up and add an emotional tremor. So well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much, Melissa. I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs