Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Mrs. J"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This has a good line up of mechanical appreciation and relationship with the man of operation; the order of expression is so, so in the perspective of realistic decision making; a good going work with personalized interest for movement; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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This has a good line up of mechanical appreciation and relationship with the man of operation; the order of expression is so, so in the perspective of realistic decision making; a good going work with personalized interest for movement; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from Sanku
The( deliberate) confusion about the names was funny .This may strike chord in many readers. Sales persons can often go overboard in their enthusiasm to con money from the victims
Loved the twist in the end .it was totally unexpected
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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The( deliberate) confusion about the names was funny .This may strike chord in many readers. Sales persons can often go overboard in their enthusiasm to con money from the victims
Loved the twist in the end .it was totally unexpected
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Sanku
Comment from LJbutterfly
This dialogue only story is really funny. I went to that same auto mechanic after I purchased my first car. If my husband hadn't gone back to the mechanic with me, I would have thought my car was falling apart. This story may be fiction, but up-selling really happens. Thanks for the afternoon smile.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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This dialogue only story is really funny. I went to that same auto mechanic after I purchased my first car. If my husband hadn't gone back to the mechanic with me, I would have thought my car was falling apart. This story may be fiction, but up-selling really happens. Thanks for the afternoon smile.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thanks, LJ
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Bill,
So, Mrs. J was actually Roger's boss, and testing him on picking apart a poor misfortunate (sucker) customer. You had me fooled once again. In fact, Mrs. J was actually quite a crook!
My favorite line,
"My chauffer will be here with the Rolls in a few minutes."
Nicely penned!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Hi Bill,
So, Mrs. J was actually Roger's boss, and testing him on picking apart a poor misfortunate (sucker) customer. You had me fooled once again. In fact, Mrs. J was actually quite a crook!
My favorite line,
"My chauffer will be here with the Rolls in a few minutes."
Nicely penned!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Kimbob
Comment from Terry Broxson
I absolutely love the creative humor you have written. In all humor, there must be an element or kernel of truth. You have provided a story that most folks would consider possible, or maybe it has already happened to them. Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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I absolutely love the creative humor you have written. In all humor, there must be an element or kernel of truth. You have provided a story that most folks would consider possible, or maybe it has already happened to them. Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Terry, for the excellent review.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
It has been a long time since an up sale was pitch to me. Who does that? Leaf gutter salespersons? Home and car warranty repairs services? Car dealerships? Politicians.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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It has been a long time since an up sale was pitch to me. Who does that? Leaf gutter salespersons? Home and car warranty repairs services? Car dealerships? Politicians.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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I recall the bait and switch at Sears. This item is advertised to be on sale, but not in stock, but another, at a higher cost, is everywhere..............................................
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That's true, many did. I cannot recall stores having rainchecks back in the day.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Bill,
this was hilarious! I loved all the mispronunciations of the name. I was laughing as I read this. For some reason your stories aren't coming up for me, though I'm following you. I just happened to look at chapters and stories and saw this. Well done buddy.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Hello Bill,
this was hilarious! I loved all the mispronunciations of the name. I was laughing as I read this. For some reason your stories aren't coming up for me, though I'm following you. I just happened to look at chapters and stories and saw this. Well done buddy.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Tom.
Comment from Wendy G
A great story, and a nice twist to it - a fun read. Well done!
Wendy
Typos: "chauffeur" and "our lead mechanic" should be followed by a comma, not a period.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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A great story, and a nice twist to it - a fun read. Well done!
Wendy
Typos: "chauffeur" and "our lead mechanic" should be followed by a comma, not a period.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Wendy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, that sounds so familiar! Been there but refused the T-shirt! lol. Men do think that women have less than half a brain with it comes to cars, but some of us can actually teach them a thing or two! This is so funny, though, especially as it's the Boss, who is all woman, that he's practicing on! Now she is what I call a 'traitor' LOL, but she won't care, she's the one who's picking up the money for her Rolls Royce! Where have I gone so wrong all my life?? Well done, my friend! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Oh, that sounds so familiar! Been there but refused the T-shirt! lol. Men do think that women have less than half a brain with it comes to cars, but some of us can actually teach them a thing or two! This is so funny, though, especially as it's the Boss, who is all woman, that he's practicing on! Now she is what I call a 'traitor' LOL, but she won't care, she's the one who's picking up the money for her Rolls Royce! Where have I gone so wrong all my life?? Well done, my friend! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Sandra. Crime pays.
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It really does, doesn't it? You're really good at these little stories. I've missed a few mainly because I've been ill, but I'll try to keep up with them again. xxx
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This sounds like something I've experienced when I went to a place I didn't know. Really irritated me, so I can believe they practice how to get the most out of a customer. Good writing.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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This sounds like something I've experienced when I went to a place I didn't know. Really irritated me, so I can believe they practice how to get the most out of a customer. Good writing.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Carol
