Going at It
a 5-7-59 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 contest writing prompt contest.
Hehehe... cute bunnies.
Good syllables count and connection between lines. Excellent imagery and presentation. Well done! I wish you the best.
Gypsy
"Smile, breathe and go slowly." -- Thich Nhat Hanh
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Excellent entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 contest writing prompt contest.
Hehehe... cute bunnies.
Good syllables count and connection between lines. Excellent imagery and presentation. Well done! I wish you the best.
Gypsy
"Smile, breathe and go slowly." -- Thich Nhat Hanh
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Gypsy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Cute poem. I gave never seen a rabbit do the backward bop unless they get a little silly like Alvin and the Chipmunks. They could sing and dance momentarily.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Cute poem. I gave never seen a rabbit do the backward bop unless they get a little silly like Alvin and the Chipmunks. They could sing and dance momentarily.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Well, this is the backend bop, and I'm certain they all do it.
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I'm thinking you're saying, when they fall on their behind.
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or perhaps when they do their little dance hopping backwards.
Comment from jaded831
Funny and true. Humans sometimes follow suit. Well written poem, fun to read, great picture, all the elements for a winning entry. To be fair I need to read them all before voting. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Funny and true. Humans sometimes follow suit. Well written poem, fun to read, great picture, all the elements for a winning entry. To be fair I need to read them all before voting. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Jade
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry to the Witty Animal 5-7-5 contest. The text is a great size. The message is clear and cute. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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This is a good entry to the Witty Animal 5-7-5 contest. The text is a great size. The message is clear and cute. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Sandra
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You are welcome.
Comment from Celyn
I think this might be suggesting something that rabbits do a lot of and I don't mean eating grass! It is funny and meets the requirements for a 5-7-5 poem so well done.
I hope you do well with it.
Celyn
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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I think this might be suggesting something that rabbits do a lot of and I don't mean eating grass! It is funny and meets the requirements for a 5-7-5 poem so well done.
I hope you do well with it.
Celyn
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Celyn
Comment from papa55mike
And the yard will soon be full of tiny rabbits searching for clover in the yard. We love the bunnies that visit our yard. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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And the yard will soon be full of tiny rabbits searching for clover in the yard. We love the bunnies that visit our yard. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Mike
Comment from royowen
Yes indeed, I guess animals can't help but be what they were created to be. They do tend to hop around and eat, and maybe wee and poop a little, great entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Yes indeed, I guess animals can't help but be what they were created to be. They do tend to hop around and eat, and maybe wee and poop a little, great entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Roy
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Welcome
Comment from Julie G1
Yes, Go forth and multiply! That is what we all do, when young enough. The bunny stork is very busy. Great little verse, too funny. Good imagery, the picture worked for this reader. Well done, hope you keep on writing for poet's glory.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Yes, Go forth and multiply! That is what we all do, when young enough. The bunny stork is very busy. Great little verse, too funny. Good imagery, the picture worked for this reader. Well done, hope you keep on writing for poet's glory.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Julie
Comment from irishauthorme
Cute! I think I get it; the "backend bop" is how the original bunnies make more bunnies.
My kids raised rabbits for a while, started with 4, and soon had a couple of dozen.
As the kids grew older they last interest and we wound up caring for the bunnies. We couldn't eat them because they were pets.
We finally gave them to a rancher. He told us later (privately) they were delicious!
Cheers,
irish
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Cute! I think I get it; the "backend bop" is how the original bunnies make more bunnies.
My kids raised rabbits for a while, started with 4, and soon had a couple of dozen.
As the kids grew older they last interest and we wound up caring for the bunnies. We couldn't eat them because they were pets.
We finally gave them to a rancher. He told us later (privately) they were delicious!
Cheers,
irish
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thanks, IAM
