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Lords Of The Glen

Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Fight for the Upper Glen"
A A new threat arises to the north.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Ricky1024
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

"Fight for the Upper Glen"
A chapter in the book entitled,
"Lord's of the Glen"
Continues a fight for dominancy.
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Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents again, were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good morning.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    Thank you Sir for the wonderful rating. You are such a blessing to me!
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent
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I found some of the splits confusing. Your story might read better is you split it up into shorter chapters and pulled the different actions together a bit more. It is an excellent story with a lot of potentials. Just needs a little work. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
    I was worried about that. I have a lot of squads fighting at the same time. I have to figure it out. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Dr. Von
Excellent
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You did a masterful job of controlling the input of action and conflict scenes. Defining the storyline with asterisks helped the transitions and aided the reader. This is an exciting fantasy book chapter that contributes well to the genre. Once again, you are skillfully crafting this piece. Good on you.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
    I really do appreciate you my friend!
reply by Dr. Von on 02-Nov-2022
    You are very welcome.