Pantygynt's Passion
Rhyming verse50 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Thank you for writing this poem and making us aware of this class. Your text size is great. Your message /purpose for this poem is clearly stated. The rhyme scheme is on point. The visual is okay. I would drop the first line of the poem down one space from the bottom of the picture. It will make the poem more balanced in the poem box. Thanks also for the additional information in the AN section.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you for writing this poem and making us aware of this class. Your text size is great. Your message /purpose for this poem is clearly stated. The rhyme scheme is on point. The visual is okay. I would drop the first line of the poem down one space from the bottom of the picture. It will make the poem more balanced in the poem box. Thanks also for the additional information in the AN section.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello Sandra. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
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You are welcome. What does the class cost?
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Hello Sandra. It is $99 for 9 sessions.
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Thanks!
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a lovely tribute to Jim. He is a superb poet and novelist, expert in world building as much as poetics.
It looks like an informative and entertaining class that is sure to be a grand success.
Thank you for sharing. :))
Gloria
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This is a lovely tribute to Jim. He is a superb poet and novelist, expert in world building as much as poetics.
It looks like an informative and entertaining class that is sure to be a grand success.
Thank you for sharing. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you Gloria. so appreciate your comments. I just wanted to get the word out about his excellent teaching skills and the upcoming class. Hope you are well!!
Melissa
Comment from nomi338
When I first joined the site I was not aware of this gift in men. However, as soon as I became aware and since that time I have become a devoted fan. He has taught me much, some by following examples of his craft, some via comments and suggestions on my own offerings. Overall I have benefitted vastly by both his examples and his direct directions and suggestions.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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When I first joined the site I was not aware of this gift in men. However, as soon as I became aware and since that time I have become a devoted fan. He has taught me much, some by following examples of his craft, some via comments and suggestions on my own offerings. Overall I have benefitted vastly by both his examples and his direct directions and suggestions.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello there. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
Comment from Anne Johnston
Thank you for your great poem describing this fellow poet who contributes so much to this site. I am sure that he has helped a lot of people develop their writing.
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Thank you for your great poem describing this fellow poet who contributes so much to this site. I am sure that he has helped a lot of people develop their writing.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello sweet Anne. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
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You are welcome. I considered the class, but just didn't think I could do it right now.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm sure Jim will love this, even though he will blush!! I'm glad he has been recognised by Fanstorians on here. I'll be speaking to him on Monday, so I'll be able to pull his leg. This is a lovely tribute to a lovely man. That is a lovely picture, too. I've seen many like that in Wales. Well done! Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
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I'm sure Jim will love this, even though he will blush!! I'm glad he has been recognised by Fanstorians on here. I'll be speaking to him on Monday, so I'll be able to pull his leg. This is a lovely tribute to a lovely man. That is a lovely picture, too. I've seen many like that in Wales. Well done! Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello Sandra. Thank you so very much for your lovely and warm review. Yes, Jim deserves to be recognized and the upcoming class is such an opportunity to learn more. Just thought I would get the word out. Thanks again!!
Melissa
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent Rhyming verse about pantygent. I was teaching haiku in fanstory when he started teaching. I heard good things about his classes. I can't rhyme at all, that's why haiku is perfect for me. Well done!
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Excellent Rhyming verse about pantygent. I was teaching haiku in fanstory when he started teaching. I heard good things about his classes. I can't rhyme at all, that's why haiku is perfect for me. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello Gypsy. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Pantygynt's Passion, presented with five AABB-rhymed quatrains, is a nice advertisement for the meter class which I suspect is at hand. Nicely done.
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This poem, Pantygynt's Passion, presented with five AABB-rhymed quatrains, is a nice advertisement for the meter class which I suspect is at hand. Nicely done.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello Bill. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
Comment from susand3022
Hi Sugarray, What a nice poem for Jim's class! I had no idea that newbies could get a free spot. How nice is that! I can certainly think of someone who could use a class... unfortunately, they seem to think so much of themselves that they won't take any advice at all, even when they ask for it!
Completely confused about some people,
Susan ;)
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Hi Sugarray, What a nice poem for Jim's class! I had no idea that newbies could get a free spot. How nice is that! I can certainly think of someone who could use a class... unfortunately, they seem to think so much of themselves that they won't take any advice at all, even when they ask for it!
Completely confused about some people,
Susan ;)
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello Susan. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :) I agree that some writers on here cannot be influenced beyond their own opinion. So sad.
Melissa
Comment from damommy
It's good to know he's still teaching. I truly enjoyed the classes I had with him. He's an amazing man, and I love him very much, and his babies. I might look into taking the class again.
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It's good to know he's still teaching. I truly enjoyed the classes I had with him. He's an amazing man, and I love him very much, and his babies. I might look into taking the class again.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
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Hello Yvonne. Thanks for the wonderful review. I know you understand about the quality teaching and the lovely opportunities to learn during his classes. I know he would love for you to attend too. Hugs, sweet Arkie!
Melissa
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
An excellent rhyming quatrain Melissa, in tribute to Jim and his great classes. I especially liked the fact that so many of your rhyme depended on the aural component rather than spelling repetitions. Kate xx
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An excellent rhyming quatrain Melissa, in tribute to Jim and his great classes. I especially liked the fact that so many of your rhyme depended on the aural component rather than spelling repetitions. Kate xx
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello Kate. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :) I am sure you would agree that Jim is excellent!
Melissa
