Pantygynt's Passion
Rhyming verse50 total reviews
Comment from Crystal Gamet
Great job! I can't believe this was your first poem! You have a true gift to write. Reading your poem makes me want to take the class you took. Sounded like a great class.
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Great job! I can't believe this was your first poem! You have a true gift to write. Reading your poem makes me want to take the class you took. Sounded like a great class.
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Crystal... hello and thank you for the lovely review. I hope you do take the class!! By the way, I noticed you gave me a four rating, which means a so so rating... can you offer a suggestion about how I might improve? Thank you.
Melissa
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Thank you so much:-)
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
excellent takes a great poem for me to give a six
but this one is well deserved I loved every word
the picture told the story in great rhyme well done my friend.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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excellent takes a great poem for me to give a six
but this one is well deserved I loved every word
the picture told the story in great rhyme well done my friend.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thank you so very much, Abby, for your lovely review. You made my day!!
Melissa
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you're very very welcome, well deseved
Comment from Aussie
A truly atmospheric poem that took me to Wales. I spent a lot of time over there. Then you introduce the most important teacher Pantygynt teacher of poems. Clever thought this poem. Well done. K xx
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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A truly atmospheric poem that took me to Wales. I spent a lot of time over there. Then you introduce the most important teacher Pantygynt teacher of poems. Clever thought this poem. Well done. K xx
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Hello, sweet Kay, thank you so much for your lovely comments and review. I am very happy that you liked it!!
Melissa
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
Thanks for the heads up. Checking calendar now to see if I can make this class work. New to Fanstory, I didn't even know that classes were offered. Your poetic promotion was spot on.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thanks for the heads up. Checking calendar now to see if I can make this class work. New to Fanstory, I didn't even know that classes were offered. Your poetic promotion was spot on.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Hello Charles. Thank you so much. I have been taking classes for a while and find each one is informative and well worth your time. You can find them under the classrooms tab on your Profile page. :)
Melissa
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Wow! This is very interesting. It sounds like it is a good thing to attend. And possible very helpful for us writers. We will have to check it out and see what happens. I really like your informative poem.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Wow! This is very interesting. It sounds like it is a good thing to attend. And possible very helpful for us writers. We will have to check it out and see what happens. I really like your informative poem.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Hello Rosemary. Thank you so much for your lovely review. I hope you are able to look at the classes... I have gotten so much out of them. You will find the Classrooms tab on your Profile page. :)
Melissa
Comment from Brandon Clark
Excellent. A very nice dedication to Pantygynt, I know he will appreciate it greatly. I have only read some of his work but not taken a class of his, yet I can tell it would be a great idea as your passion in this poem make that much clear. Great picture! That easily could be a second home to escape to and write like crazy. Thanks for sharing your poem!!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Excellent. A very nice dedication to Pantygynt, I know he will appreciate it greatly. I have only read some of his work but not taken a class of his, yet I can tell it would be a great idea as your passion in this poem make that much clear. Great picture! That easily could be a second home to escape to and write like crazy. Thanks for sharing your poem!!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hello Brandon. Thank you very much. I have been privileged to take classes and have gotten so much out of them.... I just wanted to let everyone know that there is an upcoming opportunity. :)
Melissa
Comment from MissMerri
This is a most delightful poem, well written by a poet who obviously knows meter and rhyme and how to make the most of formed poetry. I loved the last class we had from Jim so I'm thinking I'd like to take this one too, and thank you, Melissa, for so poetically bringing it to our attention. Great job!! MM
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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This is a most delightful poem, well written by a poet who obviously knows meter and rhyme and how to make the most of formed poetry. I loved the last class we had from Jim so I'm thinking I'd like to take this one too, and thank you, Melissa, for so poetically bringing it to our attention. Great job!! MM
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hey there Adonna. I am so happy that you liked it. I always LOVE your metered verses and hope you do take the class so we can share our creativity together. I plan on signing up tomorrow. I was giving everyone else a chance for a seat, but I'm not waiting anymore... LOL. Hugs and thank you!!
Melissa
Comment from Debbie Pope
Thank you for doing this for Jim. It takes a long time to familiarize yourself with all that FanStory has to offer. Your well-written poem is very helpful, and you promoted it enough for reviewers to notice it.
I think your meter is perfect.
Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thank you for doing this for Jim. It takes a long time to familiarize yourself with all that FanStory has to offer. Your well-written poem is very helpful, and you promoted it enough for reviewers to notice it.
I think your meter is perfect.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hi Debbie. Thanks, sweet friend, for your lovely words that really encourage me. I have gotten so much out of Jim's classes that I wanted to let everyone know about the Meter class that is coming up. Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am a huge fan of Pantygynt (Jim). I am not a poet but enjoyed his novels immensely. Thank you for sharing this poetic tribute to him. I am positive he will cherish it. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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I am a huge fan of Pantygynt (Jim). I am not a poet but enjoyed his novels immensely. Thank you for sharing this poetic tribute to him. I am positive he will cherish it. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hello Barbara. Thank you! I really appreciate your comments. I have enjoyed taking his classes and have really gotten a lot out of them... just wanted to get the word out. :)
Melissa
Comment from Patrick Abernathy
The meter on this is spot on. It makes it easy and fun to read. You could drum along with it if you wanted! A great advertisement for the meter class and it's so cool you wanted to shout out the instructor.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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The meter on this is spot on. It makes it easy and fun to read. You could drum along with it if you wanted! A great advertisement for the meter class and it's so cool you wanted to shout out the instructor.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments... so appreciated, Patrick.
Melissa
