old/new love
my first acrostic31 total reviews
Comment from Malcolm Rothery
It is very clear to see a change in your outlook in your writing. It is now bursting with optimism. I am very happy for you. I wish you all the luck because you deserve it. x
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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It is very clear to see a change in your outlook in your writing. It is now bursting with optimism. I am very happy for you. I wish you all the luck because you deserve it. x
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for the support and kind words.
Comment from LateBloomer
Jessi, this is a wonderful acrostic. Your message is clear, and I am so very happy for you. I hope that your poem wins! Some things are just meant to be. BTW, my hubby's name is Steve. Remember, I was the "old maid" of the family, and I had a lot of "fun" in my old-maid days - lol. Great poem. I am so happy to read some happy news. Wish I had a Sixer.
Xo. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Jessi, this is a wonderful acrostic. Your message is clear, and I am so very happy for you. I hope that your poem wins! Some things are just meant to be. BTW, my hubby's name is Steve. Remember, I was the "old maid" of the family, and I had a lot of "fun" in my old-maid days - lol. Great poem. I am so happy to read some happy news. Wish I had a Sixer.
Xo. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Congratulations. I'm so happy for you. It's interesting that you didn't enter the Acrostic poetry contest and entered "Something Good Happened Recently" instead.
Well done and good luck. I really like this Acrostic poem.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Congratulations. I'm so happy for you. It's interesting that you didn't enter the Acrostic poetry contest and entered "Something Good Happened Recently" instead.
Well done and good luck. I really like this Acrostic poem.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Well, I'm not too confident in my acrostic ability, but this was something good that happened recently. Thanks for the support.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Firstly, I am glad you rekindled an old friendship. and it blossomed into more. The text is an okay size. The acrostic has a clear message. However, the acrostic is just gray and doesn't show the happiness you have found. Make the background a color, add a visual of a heart or some other type of love symbol. Make the first letters a bit larger and a different color from the other letters/words. Good luck in your relationship and in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Firstly, I am glad you rekindled an old friendship. and it blossomed into more. The text is an okay size. The acrostic has a clear message. However, the acrostic is just gray and doesn't show the happiness you have found. Make the background a color, add a visual of a heart or some other type of love symbol. Make the first letters a bit larger and a different color from the other letters/words. Good luck in your relationship and in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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I will change the formatting when I get home tonight. Thanks for the suggestions and kind words.
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You are welcome. I will check it out after you make the adjustments.
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I took some of your suggestions and updated the look of my poem. Thanks!
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It's so much better. Love the adjustments. You are welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
This makes me so happy and I hope this poem wins! Thanks so much for sharing such a beautiful event in your life. I'm so glad that you and Steve shared revealed your love for each other!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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This makes me so happy and I hope this poem wins! Thanks so much for sharing such a beautiful event in your life. I'm so glad that you and Steve shared revealed your love for each other!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thanks for the kind words and pump! I appreciate the support in both ways!
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Comment from Spitfire
Smart you to put this into a poem and enter into a suitable contest. I remember confessing to one of my crushes at my thirtieth high school reunion that I was crazy about him. He said that he had a crush on me too. I didn't believe him!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Smart you to put this into a poem and enter into a suitable contest. I remember confessing to one of my crushes at my thirtieth high school reunion that I was crazy about him. He said that he had a crush on me too. I didn't believe him!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thanks for reading and sharing! I understand not believing. I didn?t believe him at first either
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yay! I am happy for you and Steve! I didn't know about your secret crush but now it is out in the open for all to see. I like your work on your first acrostic it works well and you highlighted the first letter which helps definitely. Thank you for sharing and I hope you win the contest! Also, I hope you and Steve make a real go of it!
Jesse
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Yay! I am happy for you and Steve! I didn't know about your secret crush but now it is out in the open for all to see. I like your work on your first acrostic it works well and you highlighted the first letter which helps definitely. Thank you for sharing and I hope you win the contest! Also, I hope you and Steve make a real go of it!
Jesse
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much!!! I appreciate the kind words and support
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Re-connection after so long. I am extremely happy for you. And delighted that it is giving impetus to your writing. That's just icing on the cake. Kate xx
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Re-connection after so long. I am extremely happy for you. And delighted that it is giving impetus to your writing. That's just icing on the cake. Kate xx
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good acrostic poem about you and Steve, and I am so excited for you! New love is always exciting and fresh. You used very good descriptive words. Maybe one day you can post a picture of you and Steve together and write a poem. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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This is a very good acrostic poem about you and Steve, and I am so excited for you! New love is always exciting and fresh. You used very good descriptive words. Maybe one day you can post a picture of you and Steve together and write a poem. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Teri! I appreciate your support and kind words
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry read well, Jessi. Great job for your first
acrostic. I liked the way you formatted the lines with the bold
first letter. Your words read smoothly with great imagery. I'm
thrilled for you.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Your contest entry read well, Jessi. Great job for your first
acrostic. I liked the way you formatted the lines with the bold
first letter. Your words read smoothly with great imagery. I'm
thrilled for you.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Jan! I am really happy
