Lords Of The Glen
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "A Moment Alone "A A new threat arises to the north.
4 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Von
I appreciate the clear descriptions of the characters and their connection in this strong storyline. Your writing ability brings to life the scenery and its relevance to the story. I believe you have artfully juggled and melded the message. Well done. This is a solid chapter that awaits increasing conflict and relationships. Good writing.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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I appreciate the clear descriptions of the characters and their connection in this strong storyline. Your writing ability brings to life the scenery and its relevance to the story. I believe you have artfully juggled and melded the message. Well done. This is a solid chapter that awaits increasing conflict and relationships. Good writing.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you kind Sir!
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Very welcome.
Comment from Ricky1024
Well I think out of the chapters I've read and reviewed this one I like the best cuz it has a rich history of the King's family.
The previous battle was quite amazing also for I loved the archery and the arrows flinging and flying.
But it seems like they're still going to be more Green goblin blood shed before this is completed?
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Well I think out of the chapters I've read and reviewed this one I like the best cuz it has a rich history of the King's family.
The previous battle was quite amazing also for I loved the archery and the arrows flinging and flying.
But it seems like they're still going to be more Green goblin blood shed before this is completed?
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you kind Sir! I appreciate your time.
Comment from Stonewall James
Excellent!! As a lover of Roman history, this battle swept me up in the theater of war as if I was witnessing the Romans themselves caught within the deadly vicd of imperial battle. Your image is forged by the use of strong descriptive language that compelled me to enter the minds of both King and footsoldier. The ease in which you write delivers your story, your vision, your hero to our very shores. This was an exciting, intense and captivating read. Truly an inspiration for both a reader and writer. Thank you, I cannot find anything of value to suggest improvement, I am too enamoured with both your style and wonderful story. Thank you. SJ
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Excellent!! As a lover of Roman history, this battle swept me up in the theater of war as if I was witnessing the Romans themselves caught within the deadly vicd of imperial battle. Your image is forged by the use of strong descriptive language that compelled me to enter the minds of both King and footsoldier. The ease in which you write delivers your story, your vision, your hero to our very shores. This was an exciting, intense and captivating read. Truly an inspiration for both a reader and writer. Thank you, I cannot find anything of value to suggest improvement, I am too enamoured with both your style and wonderful story. Thank you. SJ
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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I too love Roman history, my friend! Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Nice story chapter. It serves as a detailed synopsis of the book. I liked the atmosphere set during the battle and the preparation of king Tronin for his meeting. The only thing I found slightly lengthy was the exposition , in the first part. Maybe some dialogue would have cut a bit the lengthy descriptions.
Great mastery of the whole story idea.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Nice story chapter. It serves as a detailed synopsis of the book. I liked the atmosphere set during the battle and the preparation of king Tronin for his meeting. The only thing I found slightly lengthy was the exposition , in the first part. Maybe some dialogue would have cut a bit the lengthy descriptions.
Great mastery of the whole story idea.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thanks! I need more dialogue
