Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 55 "Natal Plum Thorns"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from Ricky1024
This is another great and inspiring Tanka.
The artwork again is the same and it's also quite effective.
Well written again with no grammar issues and thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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This is another great and inspiring Tanka.
The artwork again is the same and it's also quite effective.
Well written again with no grammar issues and thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
LOL I knew if anybody could include all the senses it would you. It really wasn't challenge; I was just wondering. This is a beautifully written poem. I have never heard of natal plums. Will have to search them out.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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LOL I knew if anybody could include all the senses it would you. It really wasn't challenge; I was just wondering. This is a beautifully written poem. I have never heard of natal plums. Will have to search them out.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Yes, I know you didn't challenge me. I didn't know how to explain it. Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from lyenochka
You did cover all the senses in this poem. But even more than that, I like the powerful emotional images that you covered as well such as "rage" like "crashing waves" and " fierce grief of lost love."
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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You did cover all the senses in this poem. But even more than that, I like the powerful emotional images that you covered as well such as "rage" like "crashing waves" and " fierce grief of lost love."
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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thank you very much for reading and reviewing my tanka, big sister. Love you.
MariVal
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Comment from Theodore McDowell
I love the host of sensory images in this one and the desperate longing of the lover despite the thorns between them. Well done, and I hope all is well with you.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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I love the host of sensory images in this one and the desperate longing of the lover despite the thorns between them. Well done, and I hope all is well with you.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Hello, Theodore, all is well with me, I wish the same for you. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Thank you!
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"Love the ones who understand you and forget the ones that don't." - Nikki Rowe
Comment from Faith Williams
That second stanza of your tanka pair is a sensory delight--visual, scent, taste, sound, and touch. (I just read your author notes.) You have definitely achieved the use of all senses. Amazing description. Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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That second stanza of your tanka pair is a sensory delight--visual, scent, taste, sound, and touch. (I just read your author notes.) You have definitely achieved the use of all senses. Amazing description. Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much, Faith, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
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