Death By Murder
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Death By Murder - Chap 8"A jewel heist, rival gangs and a cold case.
16 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Sign of a good writer ~ know when to "pace" things. This is just the right place to interject a little spark and flirtation between Emmy and Hank and give the jewel heist and the (mis)adventures of a wayward Bennie time to "steep." It just makes me all the more curious as to what is about to happen next!
(With the couple and with the jewels!)
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Sign of a good writer ~ know when to "pace" things. This is just the right place to interject a little spark and flirtation between Emmy and Hank and give the jewel heist and the (mis)adventures of a wayward Bennie time to "steep." It just makes me all the more curious as to what is about to happen next!
(With the couple and with the jewels!)
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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This story has developed many twists and turns in my mind that the reader has no way of anticipating yet. I just hope I can smoothly transition my thoughts to paper.
Love ya
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I have no doubt you'll have us all eating out of your hand...
I really enjoyed this "change up" ~ it's a gift to know how to time these interludes...
Comment from Carol Clark2
Another well-written chapter. I'm glad to learn about the beginning of things between Hank and Emmy. It sounds like Lance never should have trusted his cousin with information about the jewels. Looking forward to the next segment. Sorry I'm behind in reviewing. Blessings.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Another well-written chapter. I'm glad to learn about the beginning of things between Hank and Emmy. It sounds like Lance never should have trusted his cousin with information about the jewels. Looking forward to the next segment. Sorry I'm behind in reviewing. Blessings.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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I am the tortoise moving forward but way too slow. Especially when your kindness is so much appreciated. Thank you for the kindness and for enjoying the story.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Great dialogue, between Bennie and his Pops and between Hank and Emmy. I'm enjoying the slow, detailed development of the story. So far, the reader can imagine some of the things that have to take place, but watching it play out is half the fun. Great episode.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Great dialogue, between Bennie and his Pops and between Hank and Emmy. I'm enjoying the slow, detailed development of the story. So far, the reader can imagine some of the things that have to take place, but watching it play out is half the fun. Great episode.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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First and foremost, I want to thank you for continuing to read and enjoy the story. You put a smile on my face. I appreciate your time and your thoughtfulness.
Sorry for the delay but we have just had our 7th death in our family and close friends this year and it's taking a serious toll on all of us. Thank you for understanding.
Apologize for the standard post.... Hugs, Carol
Comment from Shirley McLain
Are Hank and Emmy going to develope into something. You did a great job with the intensity of this story. You also showed the stupidity of Bennie very well. I can visualize his drunk dad telling the world about the diamonds. Looking forward to more. Shirley
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Are Hank and Emmy going to develope into something. You did a great job with the intensity of this story. You also showed the stupidity of Bennie very well. I can visualize his drunk dad telling the world about the diamonds. Looking forward to more. Shirley
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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First and foremost, I want to thank you for continuing to read and enjoy the story. You put a smile on my face. I appreciate your time and your thoughtfulness.
Sorry for the delay but we have just had our 7th death in our family and close friends this year and it's taking a serious toll on all of us. Thank you for understanding.
Apologize for the standard post.... Hugs, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
Wow, Bennie and Rudy sure don't know how to be discrete, do they, Carol? I'm sure some people were listening intently. I was glad to get back to Hank and Emmy. lol Well done.
A few little spags:
To what do I own(owe) the pleasure?"
Let's get out (of) here before you starve to death."
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Wow, Bennie and Rudy sure don't know how to be discrete, do they, Carol? I'm sure some people were listening intently. I was glad to get back to Hank and Emmy. lol Well done.
A few little spags:
To what do I own(owe) the pleasure?"
Let's get out (of) here before you starve to death."
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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First and foremost, I want to thank you for continuing to read and enjoy the story. You put a smile on my face. I appreciate your time and your thoughtfulness.
Sorry for the delay but we have just had our 7th death in our family and close friends this year and it's taking a serious toll on all of us. Thank you for understanding.
Apologize for the standard post.... Hugs, Carol
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You?re very welcome, Carol.
Comment from Ric Myworld
As always, there's a little touch of about everything in this chapter. And there are more questions created than answers that keep me coming back, begging for me. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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As always, there's a little touch of about everything in this chapter. And there are more questions created than answers that keep me coming back, begging for me. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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First and foremost, I want to thank you for continuing to read and enjoy the story. You put a smile on my face. I appreciate your time and your thoughtfulness.
Sorry for the delay but we have just had our 7th death in our family and close friends this year and it's taking a serious toll on all of us. Thank you for understanding.
Apologize for the standard post.... Hugs, Carol
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Begin Again a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. Your story is well written, I especially enjoy the banter between the characters in both scenes. It will be interesting Rudy can keep his mouth shut and if the cops become a couple. Nice job!
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Hello Begin Again a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. Your story is well written, I especially enjoy the banter between the characters in both scenes. It will be interesting Rudy can keep his mouth shut and if the cops become a couple. Nice job!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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First and foremost, I want to thank you for continuing to read and enjoy the story. You put a smile on my face. I appreciate your time and your thoughtfulness.
Sorry for the delay but we have just had our 7th death in our family and close friends this year and it's taking a serious toll on all of us. Thank you for understanding.
Apologize for the standard post.... Hugs, Carol
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. I must say when you get back to writing you jump in full force.I just knew Bennie could not keep his mouth shut after all the drinking he did. I do not see any room for improvement.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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This is another excellent chapter. I must say when you get back to writing you jump in full force.I just knew Bennie could not keep his mouth shut after all the drinking he did. I do not see any room for improvement.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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First and foremost, I want to thank you for continuing to read and enjoy the story. You put a smile on my face. I appreciate your time and your thoughtfulness.
Sorry for the delay but we have just had our 7th death in our family and close friends this year and it's taking a serious toll on all of us. Thank you for understanding.
Apologize for the standard post.... Hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Oh no! Bennie and Rudy and Sandy now all have added more danger to Lance. It's nice to get away and return to Hank and Emmy getting to know each other.
away, Clearing the air with his hand. (clearing)
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Oh no! Bennie and Rudy and Sandy now all have added more danger to Lance. It's nice to get away and return to Hank and Emmy getting to know each other.
away, Clearing the air with his hand. (clearing)
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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First and foremost, I want to thank you for continuing to read and enjoy the story. You put a smile on my face. I appreciate your time and your thoughtfulness.
Sorry for the delay but we have just had our 7th death in our family and close friends this year and it's taking a serious toll on all of us. Thank you for understanding.
Apologize for the standard post.... Hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
A pity Bennie told his father - especially as the two of them were both loud with liquor. The secret will not be a secret for more than one minute! Sounds like hank and Emmy are off to a good start, but ... what will the twists be? Nothing goes smoothly! Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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A pity Bennie told his father - especially as the two of them were both loud with liquor. The secret will not be a secret for more than one minute! Sounds like hank and Emmy are off to a good start, but ... what will the twists be? Nothing goes smoothly! Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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First and foremost, I want to thank you for continuing to read and enjoy the story. You put a smile on my face. I appreciate your time and your thoughtfulness.
Sorry for the delay but we have just had our 7th death in our family and close friends this year and it's taking a serious toll on all of us. Thank you for understanding.
Apologize for the standard post.... Hugs, Carol
