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Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Haha..A good entry to the monostich contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
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Haha..A good entry to the monostich contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
Comment from JoannaN
Lol :) 1) this is funny. 2) and true 3) it is one of the few monostich poems that actually fit into one line 4) the accompanying picture matches it perfectly. 5) this is something you actually could hang on a official roadpost.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Lol :) 1) this is funny. 2) and true 3) it is one of the few monostich poems that actually fit into one line 4) the accompanying picture matches it perfectly. 5) this is something you actually could hang on a official roadpost.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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I?m glad my one liner made you laugh and thank you for the extra shiny star, it was a delightful surprise!
Keep safe!
Comment from Thomas Blanks
Fantastic visual and idea. Perhaps the punctuation could make it better? The way it is written now makes it sound as if you are ten minutes from the sea if you tumble for two of those ten minutes. I think you mean to say... Ten minutes from the sea; two if you tumble. (Am I correct in what your intended message was?) I leave it up to you whether you want to edit. Cheers! Great idea either way! I loved it!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Fantastic visual and idea. Perhaps the punctuation could make it better? The way it is written now makes it sound as if you are ten minutes from the sea if you tumble for two of those ten minutes. I think you mean to say... Ten minutes from the sea; two if you tumble. (Am I correct in what your intended message was?) I leave it up to you whether you want to edit. Cheers! Great idea either way! I loved it!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Yes , that's what I meant.
Thank you for the helpful feedback. I have edited it. Glad it made you laugh.
Keep safe!
Comment from Kaiku
Very good. Had me laughing as the picture was tumbling open. OMG, I don't want anything to do with those 2 minutes. Yikes! This has to be in Europe somewhere.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Very good. Had me laughing as the picture was tumbling open. OMG, I don't want anything to do with those 2 minutes. Yikes! This has to be in Europe somewhere.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Yes , I am from Europe. I;m glad my poem made you laugh. The extra star was a surprise, much appreciated.
Keep safe!
