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teenage love

Monostitch poem entry

6 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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A good entry to the monostich contest. This is the best entry I have read thus far. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    Sandra,

    Thanks for your kind review. If you also voted for my contest poem, then I will credit your vote for the top rung on the podium.

    Mark
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 02-Nov-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet!

you have two votes now.

I love this overload of cuteness . I'm smiling from ear to ear.

Those two feathered lovers are so sweet , there is food but they are too wrapped up in each other to care.

Of course, who needs food when there is l' amour! ( hearts)

I love the two hearts that tie up your wee poem.






 Comment Written 02-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    Thanks for your support for this very short one liner. Your vote obviously was a reason for my winning placement.

    Mark
reply by tempeste on 03-Nov-2022
    Short but charming.

    Congratulations for the well deserved win!

    Keep safe🍀

Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
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This is sweet and the photo of the birds is brilliant. They actually give me the feeling that they are working up to a kiss or just kissed.I don't think at my age I can even remember my first teenage kiss.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
    MM,

    Maybe you can?t recall that teenage kiss, But surely you remember your last kiss. (-; Thanks for your support for this contest entry. Maybe those lovebirds are just pecking LOL
Comment from Stonewall James
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How simplicity is born from our deepest murmurs of heart. So delightful, provoking and uttermost true. I was immediately entranced by this purest of philosophy. Thank you, I adore it. SJ

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
    SJ,

    Methinks you too recall that first kiss and its memory may stick with you to the end of your life.
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello fellow poet, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
    Undoubtedly, we all remember that moment. And may remain with us to the last days of our lives.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
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How true!!!! I love your simple line poem. It conveys a ton of feelings and arouse the youth in us once more. Ahhhh!!! Memories of that first love.... so innocent, so genuine...
Great job.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
    Mario,

    Thanks for your good wishes. My guess we all have those memories and they may still be with us at life?s end LOL