Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

Wow! This appears to be more wishful thinking than a poem. As horrible as he is, I still wish death on no one. It's a good entry to the monostich contest. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022

thanks a lot appreciate it

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 02-Nov-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Heh heh. I think there is one or two that might think that there are a few people out to get Donald Trump, but of course, could that be true? Beautifully written, a great "appetiser", good luck, great post, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022

thanks a lot

reply by royowen on 31-Oct-2022

Well done

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This monostich poem for former President Trump seems to have a bit of a sad ending, in that McDonald's will likely be blamed for contributing to the man's demise.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022

reminds me of an urban legend. When the movie "super size me" came out the CEO of Mc Donalds had a big mac for lunch saying it was great and healthy then died of a massive heart attack on TV

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello fellow poet, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest....If poems could come true.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022

yeah that's true