Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Geisha Glides Gracefully"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again, your poem hit our senses. I think you only missed taste. That would be hard to do in a poem, I think. I bet it could be done. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Once again, your poem hit our senses. I think you only missed taste. That would be hard to do in a poem, I think. I bet it could be done. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Barbara, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Thank you!
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"Love the ones who understand you and forget the ones that don't." - Nikki Rowe
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, well done. Beautiful photos and presentation. Great alliteration.
I especially liked:
Geisha glides gracefully
across bamboo floor
(Good imagery)
Also:
gentle jasmine scent follows
(Good sensory appeal)
A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. Margaret ~ LB
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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Hi Gypsy, well done. Beautiful photos and presentation. Great alliteration.
I especially liked:
Geisha glides gracefully
across bamboo floor
(Good imagery)
Also:
gentle jasmine scent follows
(Good sensory appeal)
A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. Margaret ~ LB
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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Margaret, it's always good to hear from you. Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanka poem- excellent picture presentation- poem has a nice flow- good use of metaphors describe- hair, breeze blowing- jasmine- hint - nice AP
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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I like your Tanka poem- excellent picture presentation- poem has a nice flow- good use of metaphors describe- hair, breeze blowing- jasmine- hint - nice AP
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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Ap, Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from lyenochka
You always invoke so many senses in your poetry! This poem had me hearing the graceful steps on the bamboo floor and feeling the breeze and smelling the jasmine. It's you hear, feel, and then see the face revealed and then smell the lovely jasmine as it wafts after her. Great job as always!!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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You always invoke so many senses in your poetry! This poem had me hearing the graceful steps on the bamboo floor and feeling the breeze and smelling the jasmine. It's you hear, feel, and then see the face revealed and then smell the lovely jasmine as it wafts after her. Great job as always!!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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Thank you! I try to engage senses and emotions. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review. Love you. ❤️
Marival
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
The alliterations used in this Tanka poem, both literal and aural, are wonderful. They provide the poem with a tremendous smoothness, and drive the progression of the poem. Much enjoyed. Kate xx
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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The alliterations used in this Tanka poem, both literal and aural, are wonderful. They provide the poem with a tremendous smoothness, and drive the progression of the poem. Much enjoyed. Kate xx
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much, Kate, for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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