Nightlight
Performing3 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
A good entry to the monostich contest. The one line is beautifully stated. I can see this being expanded to a larger poem. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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A good entry to the monostich contest. The one line is beautifully stated. I can see this being expanded to a larger poem. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thank you, your review made me smile.
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I'm glad. You are welcome.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-You have a good topic for your monostich.
-The title is very good and leads into the poem.
-I like the idea of a "magical night" under the moonlight.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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-Nice image and presentation.
-You have a good topic for your monostich.
-The title is very good and leads into the poem.
-I like the idea of a "magical night" under the moonlight.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much.
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You are welcome.
Comment from RodG
I used to teach my students that the VERB is the most important word in a sentence. A participle (ing) is a weak verb. Strengthen yours. Use CREATES. Otherwise, your short Monostich expresses your point clearly.
Rod
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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I used to teach my students that the VERB is the most important word in a sentence. A participle (ing) is a weak verb. Strengthen yours. Use CREATES. Otherwise, your short Monostich expresses your point clearly.
Rod
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your review.
