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Blind Date

Reality

4 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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A good entry to the monostich contest. This poem has great wordplay. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    I laugh every time I read it, but I?m a sucker (see what I did there) for puns. Either it was too obvious or my sense of humor is a tad off! Matters not. It amused me. Hope you are having an awesome week. I saw your Rainbow entry. Very nice work indeed. I was sure you would win, but looks like it is still heavily contested (yeah another pun). Good luck, my friend!
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 02-Nov-2022
    You are welcome! I got the pun and the other two in your response. LOL I too love puns.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    We vets have silly stupid senses of humor! I think they issued it in the ALICE packs, or maybe sprinkled something in our chow hall meals. Thank you for all of the encouragement. You really are a blessing!
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 02-Nov-2022
    Watch it now! I was a 91S Health Inspector inspecting those mess halls. Scored 100% on my MOS test every year I served. I would have caught it. LOL
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    Ha! Good times. Ate in chow halls for all four branches and everyone?s food was better than USMCs food. Too funny!
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 02-Nov-2022
    Ha! I was an Army Health Inspector.
Comment from Dr. Von
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Perfect. The one-line punch is well delivered. Of course, the artwork serves the theme and the words very well. This is certainly dark humor in its simplest expression.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
    Not a lot to work with. One sentence poems are tough. Thanks for the review!
reply by Dr. Von on 01-Nov-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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So very true. Theological Dracula or the emotional Dracula. Both suck. This was funny on a play on words kind of way. Perfect for this season. Great job. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Gretchen

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
    You now its funny when you laugh while writing it! Thanks for the review!
Comment from jessizero
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I definitely laughed at this one. My review has to be at least 150 characters, so it's going to be longer than your poem. I liked this monostich - it was funny! Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
    Thank you! If I made you laugh Jessi, then I accomplished my goal!