Lords Of The Glen
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Gorilla King"A A new threat arises to the north.
2 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your story is progressing nicely. It is much better now than some of the first chapters were. It appears that you have a handle on things now. I truly enjoyed this chapter. The dialogues is great an the scenes are vivid. Nice writing.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Your story is progressing nicely. It is much better now than some of the first chapters were. It appears that you have a handle on things now. I truly enjoyed this chapter. The dialogues is great an the scenes are vivid. Nice writing.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you. It is a work in progress. I appreciate your review, my friend!
Comment from Mario PIERRE
This is a beautiful chapter, full of scenes and sequel, which gives it a sustained strength throughout. Neatly written and I can clearly visualize the protagonists quite well.
Great read!!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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This is a beautiful chapter, full of scenes and sequel, which gives it a sustained strength throughout. Neatly written and I can clearly visualize the protagonists quite well.
Great read!!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much! I appreciate you taking the time to read it
