Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

A good entry to the monostich contest. The title adds to the poem. However, the text needs to be much larger. The text is dwarfed by the large visual. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022

Thank you so much, Sandra,
for the 5 star review. Many
blessings to you and your
family. ~

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 02-Nov-2022

You are welcome. Blessings to you too.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was something I think we can all relate to. I liked the visual of a very tired dad trying to keep his cool while sucking down egg nog. A lot of fun in this small poem. Great job. Gretchen

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022

Thank you so much, Gretchen. With all that's going on in the world, we need plenty of humor. Thank
you for-the 5 stars and many
blessings to you.

Comment from R.B.Bunn

Excellent

This was really cute. I'm sure Santa gave the dad a healthy dose of spirits in that eggnog. Though, this really did get me to think about the efforts parents go through on Christmas Eve to get the presents assembled in time for Christmas morning. Must be a very sleepless night indeed.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022

Thank you, R.B., for reading
my one line humor poem.
I recall my father assembling
our bicycles on Christmas
Eve after us kids went to bed.
He didn't drink spiked eggnog but still handled it
well. Thank you for the 5
stars. Many blessings to you.