Vaccinations
Protection against epidemic diseases4 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good acrostic poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. I got my flu shot and pneumonia shot not long ago. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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This is a very good acrostic poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. I got my flu shot and pneumonia shot not long ago. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thank you Teri for your supportive review. Scientists really have their work cut out distinguishing different viruses and developing specific vaccines.
Comment from Gloria ....
I think this a clear poem illustrating the benefits we have received from vaccines. Who can ever forget the Iron Lungs. I have heard that limited cases of polio have resurfaced. Viruses are so pernicious.
A most important and timely reminder. Thank you for sharing. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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I think this a clear poem illustrating the benefits we have received from vaccines. Who can ever forget the Iron Lungs. I have heard that limited cases of polio have resurfaced. Viruses are so pernicious.
A most important and timely reminder. Thank you for sharing. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Once again, Gloria, thank you for taking the time to review my writing.
When I was a young girl our neighbour died from polio and all surrounding contacts were given the vaccine and put into quarantine.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We are all fortunate to live in these times and be covered by these scientific vaccines and live long fruitful quality lives, I am forever grateful to these clever scientists, I enjoyed your tribute here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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We are all fortunate to live in these times and be covered by these scientific vaccines and live long fruitful quality lives, I am forever grateful to these clever scientists, I enjoyed your tribute here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thank you , Dolly, for your detailed review. I too am ever grateful for scientific research that has given us the means of living fruitful lives.
Comment from Mariana Convery
It feels like a historical poem on vaccines, telling the reader to go ahead and go for it, they've been around for years. I think a little more figurative language would add layers of meaning to the poem by perhaps emphasizing other outcomes or consequences that could happen if they weren't around might strengthen the narrator's message. Otherwise, it's a cute poem.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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It feels like a historical poem on vaccines, telling the reader to go ahead and go for it, they've been around for years. I think a little more figurative language would add layers of meaning to the poem by perhaps emphasizing other outcomes or consequences that could happen if they weren't around might strengthen the narrator's message. Otherwise, it's a cute poem.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your considered review.
While writing my piece, I did have thoughts of the possible consequences if vaccines weren?t around but if I had included those thoughts I would still be writing!
