Haiku Thoughts
5-7-5 contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Your contest entry - congrats on your second place win - certainly would be awarded the funniest of all the entries. Maybe it is actually zen-like LOL.
You really did pair a terrific photo image with your verse.
Truthfully, the winning entry was heads and shoulders above our efforts. The voting results proved that out.
Mark
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Your contest entry - congrats on your second place win - certainly would be awarded the funniest of all the entries. Maybe it is actually zen-like LOL.
You really did pair a terrific photo image with your verse.
Truthfully, the winning entry was heads and shoulders above our efforts. The voting results proved that out.
Mark
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Mark. Yeah, I usually try to go with humor for most of these 5-7-5's. Lol. I actually added the laptop in the picture. It was just a pic of the guy sitting there meditating. I do that a lot too, goof around in my art program to make the pic as close to what I'm saying. Yeah, it's win some lose some on this site. Sometimes my dumb stuff actually flies. Lol. I really appreciate the stars, friend. Thanks again. Catch you the next go round.
Ron
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Ron,
I would give yourself credit for the ?computer? product placement in your notes. My guess other FanStorians would be interested in that innovative touch.
Mark
P.S. My predominant poem style is 5-7-5. Longer poems are not in my poetry wheelhouse, nor reviews of the same.
Comment from BeckyMann
This! Love it. It's simple and sends a great message. Love the art; love the words. I like it all. Good luck in the contest and with your writing in the future.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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This! Love it. It's simple and sends a great message. Love the art; love the words. I like it all. Good luck in the contest and with your writing in the future.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Becky. I actually put the laptop in the picture. He's really just sitting there meditating. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile here, Haiku is not easy to write and I am not a big fan, but i love reading those that have something to say and you made me laugh, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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You made me smile here, Haiku is not easy to write and I am not a big fan, but i love reading those that have something to say and you made me laugh, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Dolly. I was just in one of those goofy moods again. Lol. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have yourself a wonderful day.
