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Against All Odds

Wee poem

4 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Very true and nature can show us that hope exists if we try our best to survive, a poignant write and you won my vote, a fine 3-5-3, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
    Glad you liked the theme of my poem and thought it worthy of your vote!

    Thank you!

    Yes Nature is a great teacher on many levels.

    5-7-5 or less is my favourite format, I love the challenge to try and say something meaningful in a handful of words.

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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This is a good 3-5-3 poem. The text can be clearly seen. The message is clearly presented, and it reads like a quote. The visual fits perfectly, and I love it. This is my favorite entry thus far. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
    Glad you enjoyed the content of my poem.

    I found the picture sometime ago and wanted to use it.

    Thank you for taking the time to rate my work.

    Keep safe! 🍀
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 31-Oct-2022
    You are welcome. I voted for your entry.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
    Thank you for your support , much appreciated! 😐
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 31-Oct-2022
    Of course!
Comment from RodG
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A great photo chosen to illustrate your short poem.
Your message--about the stubbornness we can see in Nature-- is conveyed very clearly in but eleven syllables.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
    Actually, I found the picture first then came up with a poem.

    We can learn a lot about ourselves observing Nature.

    Thank you for taking time to comment.
Comment from zanya
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Oh yes - so few lines and syllables here to explore a poetic theme yet this one packs a punch and reminds us that tenacity in our lives can help us cope with negotiating difficult times -lovely visual

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
    I found the pic first than I came up with the message. ( biggrin)

    Glad it made impression

    Thank you for the kind review.

    Keep safe🍀