Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"Tangled in Love"
This is a Tanka poem about the most perfect of Love.
Richly Crafted both in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, very romantic. This is what I call an ooh-la-la poem.
Good descriptive writing. I especially liked:

tasting our delicious night
(Some moments need to be savored)

Well-chosen artwork. A pleasure to read. This poem made me smile. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022

Margaret,

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I think in this very short poem you mentioned every sense except hearing. This is a very sensual poem without getting explicit. Good writing. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, helpfull feedback, I'm glad you like it. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A night of passion lingers in this naughty, but subtle write about the union of two in love's embrace, I enjoyed the magic in these words, a fine post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback, I'm glad you like it. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 29-Oct-2022

You too x

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, boy does this bring back memories..
of a guy I once dated...he wore a musk scented
cologne...and everywhere he went...when he lift...
the smell stayed with me...sigh...

I love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture...
so very well written my sweet friend...love you....Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback, I'm glad you like it. Have a wonderful weekend. Love you too. (*÷*)

Gypsy hugs

reply by l.raven on 29-Oct-2022

your always so welcome Gypsy...
and you have a wonderful weekend as
will...much love...smiling back at ya...xxoo

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your Tanka poem- good picture presentation- good use of metaphors- to describe the sensory perception/ recollection of the encounter- smells/taste - good job

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022

Thank you very much, ap, have a nice weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Such a sensuous poem! I like that you covered so many senses such as touch (drenched sheets), smell (almond and earthy musk) and "tasting the night!"

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022

Thank you big sister. I'm trying to practice my classic tanka poems. I really enjoy writing them. I hope you have a wonderful weekend! Love you.

MariVal <3

reply by lyenochka on 28-Oct-2022

You have a super weekend, too! 💖💖

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Nicely done. You can feel the anticipation and also the longing shown in your poem. Wonderful word choices and your poem flows very well. Very creative with a wonderful presentation.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022

Thank you very much, Michael. I appreciate your time and excellent review. You're most kind.

Gypsy