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Hurry Back, She's Gone

Where, oh, where?

3 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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This is a good 3-5-3 poem. The text can be clearly seen. The message is clearly presented. I know the feeling. I too have this struggle at times. The visual fits well, but it suggests perhaps another activity. lol Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
    Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Yes, being without your muse is upsetting to
many writers. Your contest entry read well,
Mystery Author. Great syllable count per line
and a great message expressed in 11 syllables.
The image was a perfect addition.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Thomas Blanks
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When my muse leaves, it is usually only for a trip to Dunkin Donuts for a tall coffee with cream and sugar in the morning. If that's not where she is, she is in a tall bottle of Mountain Dew Zero Sugar in the evening.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    Thank you for your kind review! I have enjoyed your humor story. It is interesting. Muse can come from anywhere.