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"The Gift of Life 2003"

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very interesting and very well written post you have penned. That is very interesting what you wrote about those being in a coma. I did not know that. I hope you have a very blessed day! teri

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
    Thanks Teri for your time and review.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Nicely done. Another creative and enjoyable poem. I thought the message in your poem was unique and done in your own way which I enjoy. Keep up the great writing.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
    Thanks Michael and this took a lot of work and a little Googling to get it exactly the way I wanted.
    Occasionally I do these conversations with my son through God.
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from royowen
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Yes, a coma is definitely different from sleep, it's recovering I guess, on of the body's ways of affective healing, but I think this was different from that, it can also mean the preservation of the bodily organs to help others to survive. This is beautifully written my friend, bless you and sorry for your loss, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
    Blessings back Roy.
    And, have a wonderful Halloween Holiday.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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Watching over a loved one in a coma must be a terrible trial. I would like to believe that the comatose person could sense my presence. I don't care what the supposed experts say. My own experience has shown that experts are unreliable. Thanks for sharing. Kate xx

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
    Thanks Katherine and enjoy the Halloween Holiday today.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from irishauthorme
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A touching devotional. A terrible loss. people can sympathize but no one can say they know how you feel. No way to justify leaving life after just 18 years but I can also see that in spite of your loss, you have retained your faith. I admire your courage in the organ donation, thus saving other lives.
God Bless,
irish

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
    Your comments are perfectly cast, as well as your kind review.
    Enjoy your Halloween day.
    Doctor Ricky