Rainbow Wish
God's choice12 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
Your art fits well with your presentation and poetic words of expression.
You have adhered to the 5-7-5 syllable contest requirement. I like the colours used in your picture. A suggested change would be to the word diversity to change the colour of the "s" for it gets lost into the background same colour.
All the best to you in the contest. Changing the colour of your 's' has made diversity stand out and i do like the change. Awesome.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Your art fits well with your presentation and poetic words of expression.
You have adhered to the 5-7-5 syllable contest requirement. I like the colours used in your picture. A suggested change would be to the word diversity to change the colour of the "s" for it gets lost into the background same colour.
All the best to you in the contest. Changing the colour of your 's' has made diversity stand out and i do like the change. Awesome.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Cecilia,
Thank you for your exceptional review and comments. I changed the s. Let me know if you feel it is better.
Blessings,
Sandra
Comment from mermaids
I like the analogy of God's wish that we accept our diversity. Excellent small poem about the rainbow that makes the reader think and shows how the rainbow can unite us.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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I like the analogy of God's wish that we accept our diversity. Excellent small poem about the rainbow that makes the reader think and shows how the rainbow can unite us.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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I wish it was that easy. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Write Right Writer
Sandra...
I like your 5-7-5. Using a rainbow as a metaphor for diversity is brilliant and elevate the conversation from your wish to God's wish increases the power of your message. Well done!
Your image was perfect and your use of colorful language (pun intended) added to the impact of your poem. Kudos to you!
Blessings...
Curt (WRW)
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
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Sandra...
I like your 5-7-5. Using a rainbow as a metaphor for diversity is brilliant and elevate the conversation from your wish to God's wish increases the power of your message. Well done!
Your image was perfect and your use of colorful language (pun intended) added to the impact of your poem. Kudos to you!
Blessings...
Curt (WRW)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your supportive comments. I appreciate your humor and review.
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You are most welcome!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem a depiction of the importance of diversity. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
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This is a beautifully written poem a depiction of the importance of diversity. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much for your review.
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Your welcome
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
I love your 3 lined poem, and I got the point right away. And such a good thought about God and His declaration of diversity as demonstrated by a rainbow.
I also like the way you used different colors of font for effect.
Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
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I love your 3 lined poem, and I got the point right away. And such a good thought about God and His declaration of diversity as demonstrated by a rainbow.
I also like the way you used different colors of font for effect.
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
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Thanks for your kind comments and rating.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describing rainbows
as well as symbolizing "God's wish."
-A very good message about accepting
people for who they are, not what they look like, etc.
-It relates well to the topic of diversity.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describing rainbows
as well as symbolizing "God's wish."
-A very good message about accepting
people for who they are, not what they look like, etc.
-It relates well to the topic of diversity.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your senryu poem - good picture presentation - poem as a good word count and flow - brings to light an excellent point - especially during the times we are experiencing today's media spends most of it time dividing us against each other - beware of the abbreviated -all Americans in my eyes - all one in drag. Good Job.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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I like your senryu poem - good picture presentation - poem as a good word count and flow - brings to light an excellent point - especially during the times we are experiencing today's media spends most of it time dividing us against each other - beware of the abbreviated -all Americans in my eyes - all one in drag. Good Job.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Thomas Blanks
I can grant your wish as far as it applies to me. I can accept, no problem -accept all and consider them equal. I draw the line at preference for anyone for any reason. Equal is equal.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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I can grant your wish as far as it applies to me. I can accept, no problem -accept all and consider them equal. I draw the line at preference for anyone for any reason. Equal is equal.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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You are preaching to the choir. Amen. Thanks for the review.
Comment from irishauthorme
This is a good, different take on the rainbow, I always thought it was given to Noah after the great flood as God's promise to never flood the earth again. Also, I seem the remember reading that God would destroy the earth with fire the next time. With the present state of the world, I sometimes wonder why He hasn't done it already.
However, I have faith that someday mankind will resolve the differences and we will have world peace.
And hey, I am all for the melting pot: my ancestors came here from England and Ireland.
irish
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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This is a good, different take on the rainbow, I always thought it was given to Noah after the great flood as God's promise to never flood the earth again. Also, I seem the remember reading that God would destroy the earth with fire the next time. With the present state of the world, I sometimes wonder why He hasn't done it already.
However, I have faith that someday mankind will resolve the differences and we will have world peace.
And hey, I am all for the melting pot: my ancestors came here from England and Ireland.
irish
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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I appreciate your comments and review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Fortunately for us our world is diverse and we see good and bad, beautiful and ugly, picturesque scenes and barren lands, we can take it all in and choose our place where there is colour, after the dull rain we are blessed with a colourful rainbow, how delightful is our world, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Fortunately for us our world is diverse and we see good and bad, beautiful and ugly, picturesque scenes and barren lands, we can take it all in and choose our place where there is colour, after the dull rain we are blessed with a colourful rainbow, how delightful is our world, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Sorry, I don't find the world delightful. However, I am glad you do. Thanks for the review.
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I am sad for you, take care x x x
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Don't be. i don't impose on anyone's space feeling as I do. I'm the best cheerleader one could have.
