The Trollop
Illegal but lucrative.41 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
That's a great story, Willie. Sort of in the vein of Robert Service, my favorite poet. If you spruced up the meter a little, you would have a really good poem.
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That's a great story, Willie. Sort of in the vein of Robert Service, my favorite poet. If you spruced up the meter a little, you would have a really good poem.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
You have written a fine moral tale with a fine moral ending. You brought the characters to life very well. The illustration you created is wonderful.
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You have written a fine moral tale with a fine moral ending. You brought the characters to life very well. The illustration you created is wonderful.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
Comment from JoannaN
Your poem reminds me of a very popular tv series in the 1990s - Lucky Luke - a story from the Wild West. As a child, I loved it. Thank you for bringing back my memories.
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Your poem reminds me of a very popular tv series in the 1990s - Lucky Luke - a story from the Wild West. As a child, I loved it. Thank you for bringing back my memories.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
Comment from country ranch writer
He was lucky a cowboy noticed Jill's dirty deed and was caught red handed trying to trick an old mat and it didn't set well.
10/28/2022 pm------@012:26 pm
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He was lucky a cowboy noticed Jill's dirty deed and was caught red handed trying to trick an old mat and it didn't set well.
10/28/2022 pm------@012:26 pm
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
Comment from royowen
I like that, caught in the act, saving some money, I don't know how people manage to do the things they do. But she certainly mixed her sense of morality with many skills, this is beautifully written my friend. I love it Willie, an excellent post, beautifully written, rhymed and themed,, blessings Roy
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I like that, caught in the act, saving some money, I don't know how people manage to do the things they do. But she certainly mixed her sense of morality with many skills, this is beautifully written my friend. I love it Willie, an excellent post, beautifully written, rhymed and themed,, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are descriptive and creative. The end of this poem
made me smile. I liked how this author told a story in these words. The
poem flows and connects well. I liked style of writing the author chose.
The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
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The author's words are descriptive and creative. The end of this poem
made me smile. I liked how this author told a story in these words. The
poem flows and connects well. I liked style of writing the author chose.
The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
Comment from lavendermoon14
I love this poem. The ending made me laugh, especially with how well it fit into the rhyme scheme. It has a sort of charm, which the word choice definitely adds to. Excellent job.
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I love this poem. The ending made me laugh, especially with how well it fit into the rhyme scheme. It has a sort of charm, which the word choice definitely adds to. Excellent job.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
Comment from Thomas Blanks
That's a good way to get yerself kilt, hunny,
coming betwixt a man and his money.
Nobody cares iffin' you is a whore,
But card sharps and thieves die on the floor!
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That's a good way to get yerself kilt, hunny,
coming betwixt a man and his money.
Nobody cares iffin' you is a whore,
But card sharps and thieves die on the floor!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
The world is overrun with people that are too sorry to seek a moral way to make a living. Whores are a prime example. Your poem is well written and realistic--with some humor there at the end.
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The world is overrun with people that are too sorry to seek a moral way to make a living. Whores are a prime example. Your poem is well written and realistic--with some humor there at the end.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
A fun read with a fun ending line. I guess the prospector didn't have the sensitive behind necessary to identify the loss of the wallet. Did the cowboy return the wallet, or keep it and run off himself?
A well-told story in this poem. My only suggestion is that some may have trouble reading the font.
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A fun read with a fun ending line. I guess the prospector didn't have the sensitive behind necessary to identify the loss of the wallet. Did the cowboy return the wallet, or keep it and run off himself?
A well-told story in this poem. My only suggestion is that some may have trouble reading the font.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
